for Visit3/18/2007 c1 
10Chaco
i like your diction. but then, i always do. XD
"trees seem to sprout flowers while shedding leaves"...so pretty. omg, there's a paradox! :D
"thrice"...lol i never knew that was an actual word. ^^;
uh, ok. i'll stop reviewing this poem now cuz i'm starting to analyze it like i would have to do in AP English =o=
so~ ya. great and lovely poem! ^^
10Chacoi like your diction. but then, i always do. XD
"trees seem to sprout flowers while shedding leaves"...so pretty. omg, there's a paradox! :D
"thrice"...lol i never knew that was an actual word. ^^;
uh, ok. i'll stop reviewing this poem now cuz i'm starting to analyze it like i would have to do in AP English =o=
so~ ya. great and lovely poem! ^^