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8/24/2008 c1 Angelic Hellraiser
Reading this makes me hungry, haha. I really enjoyed the flow of it.
10/16/2007 c1 luv me like no other
cute poem!
4/30/2007 c1 Tytherpol
it's clever and kinda very pretty.

i like it much.
4/23/2007 c1 31none of burt's beeswax
sneaky. i like it.
4/7/2007 c1 1Adrian Brodskiey
I like the mentions of candy! It makes my horrible day better.

interesting format. I like it. it could use some grammatical help, but im not picky.

All the way around, I LOVE!
4/1/2007 c1 14mindOFdeliriousUNREST
even if you were just hungry writing this, it's a very well-written poem. the repetition of the "whatever-you-wish" brought it into a circle. i love the end. the rest of the poem sounds so innocent and sweet, but the end gives it a little sinister twist. great job

paz,

-the delirious one

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