for Blending In3/28/2007 c1 SiameseWhiteFoxx
Exactly...it's like they're all blind anyway even if they can see you. It just makes you to not want to be there or you just want to hide like you're blending into something other than the croud.
Exactly...it's like they're all blind anyway even if they can see you. It just makes you to not want to be there or you just want to hide like you're blending into something other than the croud.
3/12/2007 c1 
174a silenced revolution
I can really relate, I just started a new school and I don't know anyone really, so all I ever do is blend in. Great work overall, tho I agree with the previous reviewer that the poem doesn't feel finished... But other than that, really good!
~Hazellin
174a silenced revolutionI can really relate, I just started a new school and I don't know anyone really, so all I ever do is blend in. Great work overall, tho I agree with the previous reviewer that the poem doesn't feel finished... But other than that, really good!
~Hazellin
3/12/2007 c1 37TaltushMeiMei
This is really good, but the ending doesn't quite end! It feels like the poem should just keep on going, but it suddenly stops. I really like it, but that last line isn't conclusive in any way and I feel as though there should be another stanza or something.
37TaltushMeiMeiThis is really good, but the ending doesn't quite end! It feels like the poem should just keep on going, but it suddenly stops. I really like it, but that last line isn't conclusive in any way and I feel as though there should be another stanza or something.