3/12/2007 c1 174a silenced revolution
Yes, happy :)

There are some lines I don't understand: "the peaceful pulse for my loaded gun", "the wars in my head it staves", "it’s in a faraway place, I think Dover"

I wasn't expecting something about guns in a poem about sunshine :D

Hmm, perhaps just me...

Overall, I like it.

~Hazellin