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3/7/2009 c1 78Peter Harrison
Wow, that was just... A lot of epic in so short a space!

Great Job fellow Harrison
10/1/2007 c1 96SedateOperateCREMATE
I'm going to review. This poem. I like patterns. That are pointless. Like when you knit me a sandwich. I like yield signs. In my mind. They are cool never amounting to anything. Sometimes I like to cascade down the mountain upon the chest and maybe the back, but not the flesh. I like when my horses oversee the shed made from my blood. I like it when my fingers are made of cake. There you go.
4/29/2007 c1 1mmm564
Wow. You articulate very well.
3/28/2007 c1 9stalkerlesson101
You did one thing almost no one does anymore, you used an unbelievable vocabulary! I loved that aspect! I did think they poem ended a bit abruptly and the imagrey was a bit obscure. i got a bit lost the first time but when i reread it i got it. good but complex,not for everybody but i enjoyed it! good job!

3/13/2007 c1 13herpius derpius7
Ooh, this was great: the imagery, the feel of it...

"Today... / Infinity ends."

That was really nice, right there, as well as:

"Grease caked fingers / Extending to the water / Reaching for unattainable sterility."

3/13/2007 c1 5Katy Gilchrist
This is brilliant. Thre is exelent use of imargary. I just won a speech competion about waar, i'm going to Paris etc for it and this poem was better than half of the other entrees.


3/12/2007 c1 11xDancingintheRainx
Very well written. You did an excellent job with this piece. The imagery is very strong; as is the emotion. Great job!

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