for Leap of Faith9/13/2008 c1 
5Chasing TeddyBears
You could totally make a children's book out of this. Not kidding. Ever read "Goodnight Moon" by Margaret Wise Brown? I think kids would get such a kick out of this. In fact, may I have your permission to read this to the kids at my daycare? (I run one, am not IN one, lol).
5Chasing TeddyBearsYou could totally make a children's book out of this. Not kidding. Ever read "Goodnight Moon" by Margaret Wise Brown? I think kids would get such a kick out of this. In fact, may I have your permission to read this to the kids at my daycare? (I run one, am not IN one, lol).
8/27/2008 c1 55OneSilverWing
This had great flow and wonderful rhymes, plus it made me giggle like a schoolgirl.
55OneSilverWingThis had great flow and wonderful rhymes, plus it made me giggle like a schoolgirl.
1/20/2008 c1 17daughterofmusic
Haha I love it! I can't even think what to say... keep it up!
~Daughter of Music
17daughterofmusicHaha I love it! I can't even think what to say... keep it up!
~Daughter of Music
3/14/2007 c1 Fantazolic
Great poem! You've even got the rhythm right and it's really, really good.
Great work,
Fantazolic
Great poem! You've even got the rhythm right and it's really, really good.
Great work,
Fantazolic
3/12/2007 c1 11xDancingintheRainx
Very cute. ^^ The rhymes don't sound forced and this piece flowed nicely. Well done!
11xDancingintheRainxVery cute. ^^ The rhymes don't sound forced and this piece flowed nicely. Well done!