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9/13/2008 c1 5Chasing TeddyBears
You could totally make a children's book out of this. Not kidding. Ever read "Goodnight Moon" by Margaret Wise Brown? I think kids would get such a kick out of this. In fact, may I have your permission to read this to the kids at my daycare? (I run one, am not IN one, lol).
9/3/2008 c1 19WeAreBroken
heh, that was cute.

Have you seen Rent? reminded me..the title and such...
8/27/2008 c1 55OneSilverWing
This had great flow and wonderful rhymes, plus it made me giggle like a schoolgirl.
1/20/2008 c1 17daughterofmusic
Haha I love it! I can't even think what to say... keep it up!

~Daughter of Music
3/14/2007 c1 Fantazolic
Great poem! You've even got the rhythm right and it's really, really good.

Great work,

3/13/2007 c1 the-page-of-no-one
This would make an excellent children's book.
3/12/2007 c1 jennilyn.rose
Haha, I love this. It's really cute. Thanks for the fun read. =)
3/12/2007 c1 11xDancingintheRainx
Very cute. ^^ The rhymes don't sound forced and this piece flowed nicely. Well done!

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