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1/4/2008 c1 alwaysthereforyou
I like how short this is, it has a great flow to it and a very subtle rhyme. I can definitely relate to this sometimes lines just get in the way. I can imagine it being published somewhere not using the lines kind of letting the words fall where ever you want them too. Keep up the good work! :)
3/12/2007 c1 flies.like.decay
Amen to what the first person said. I won't die from writing on the lines, but I prefer boxes and circles and sometimes I write in that space between the lines. Lol. On school work I write all over the whole paper. Front, back, sides, all that good stuff. Lol. That's what math spirals are for. I had one in sixth grade and I completely filled up the back writing short stories in all different directions. I must have a history of not paying attention. (Oops?) Nice poem. It makes me happy to know there are people on this site who aren't confined behind bars. Horizontal bars, lol. PEACE!
3/12/2007 c1 gold against the soul
Short, but to the point. I enjoyed your line breaks most of all - they seem to emphasis the subject of the poem! Good write,

gold against the soul
3/12/2007 c1 11xDancingintheRainx
I like this a lot. I can relate... I don't mind writing over the lines, but I think better when I write upside down, or sideways, or swirling the letters around in a circle. This was well written and I like the idea. Great job and keep writing!

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