
5/10/2011 c1
1Psychotic Romance
Lovely. But I am assuming that when you said "the bread grows bear" you meant beer, or is there an unknown meaning in that? You have a lot of hope in poetry, I recommend that you pursue this gift.
-Lee

Lovely. But I am assuming that when you said "the bread grows bear" you meant beer, or is there an unknown meaning in that? You have a lot of hope in poetry, I recommend that you pursue this gift.
-Lee
3/15/2007 c1
145BellonaFlayreRiver
wow. the concreteness you had here is just astounding. the last stanza is my favorite of all, the rhyme scheme is entertaining. lovely.

wow. the concreteness you had here is just astounding. the last stanza is my favorite of all, the rhyme scheme is entertaining. lovely.
3/13/2007 c1
59radioactive stanica
Beautifully Done! I am going to add this to my favs.
Best Wishes!
TSP

Beautifully Done! I am going to add this to my favs.
Best Wishes!
TSP