6/11/2007 c1 17sporkofdoom
My favorite lines in here are "after the takeover of the pragmatic" and "surfaces no longer taboo" This is simple and very nice.
My favorite lines in here are "after the takeover of the pragmatic" and "surfaces no longer taboo" This is simple and very nice.
3/20/2007 c1 Ajna
Gorgeous imagery, I love the use of parentheses because it feels like its some secret you're sharing. Beautiful ending, as well, great work!
Gorgeous imagery, I love the use of parentheses because it feels like its some secret you're sharing. Beautiful ending, as well, great work!
3/19/2007 c1 53cardiolysis
Hm. I've told you what I think of it, but-
Really. People who aren't brave enough to leave their names shouldn't be commenting on others' artistic property.
Hm. I've told you what I think of it, but-
Really. People who aren't brave enough to leave their names shouldn't be commenting on others' artistic property.
3/13/2007 c1 Anonymous
Why do all these scene kids constantly think it's fine to make ill-fitting allusions to poems/poets/novels-written-by-poets? Reading poetic works does not make you poetic. Your poem is bland, and cliche at some points. Better luck next time.
Why do all these scene kids constantly think it's fine to make ill-fitting allusions to poems/poets/novels-written-by-poets? Reading poetic works does not make you poetic. Your poem is bland, and cliche at some points. Better luck next time.
3/13/2007 c1 59radioactive stanica
Intresting title. I happenend to find myself saying that this is amazing. I really enjoyed reading this. I am going to add this to my favorites.
Best Wishes!
TSP
Intresting title. I happenend to find myself saying that this is amazing. I really enjoyed reading this. I am going to add this to my favorites.
Best Wishes!
TSP