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6/25/2007 c1 Tytherpol
you write beautifully.

i wish you posted more often.
6/11/2007 c1 17sporkofdoom
My favorite lines in here are "after the takeover of the pragmatic" and "surfaces no longer taboo" This is simple and very nice.
4/1/2007 c1 63lackluster
lovely ending. it sets a nice picture. sad but gorgeous nonetheless.
3/20/2007 c1 Ajna
Gorgeous imagery, I love the use of parentheses because it feels like its some secret you're sharing. Beautiful ending, as well, great work!
3/19/2007 c1 53cardiolysis
Hm. I've told you what I think of it, but-

Really. People who aren't brave enough to leave their names shouldn't be commenting on others' artistic property.
3/13/2007 c1 Anonymous
Why do all these scene kids constantly think it's fine to make ill-fitting allusions to poems/poets/novels-written-by-poets? Reading poetic works does not make you poetic. Your poem is bland, and cliche at some points. Better luck next time.
3/13/2007 c1 59radioactive stanica
Intresting title. I happenend to find myself saying that this is amazing. I really enjoyed reading this. I am going to add this to my favorites.

Best Wishes!


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