3/14/2007 c1 59radioactive stanica
Great Job Again! I love it! I am going to add it to my C2!
3/13/2007 c1 879Moondog Dozier
This has a vivid quality, and yet it is stark at the same time. It leaves room for the reader to interpret the final line. I like how it slips from an abstract perspective to more concrete images in the second stanza. Well written and thought provoking.