for Splits5/21/2010 c29 You.Are.Amazing
Okay so when i said update tomorrow in my last review i so didn't think you would. But i decided to check back and low and behold - who says that by the way. low and behold. what the? - you have not only updated once but twice! thus you are amazing! :)
I am aware I should get an account and sign in for all this reviewing stuff, but truth be told iam a bit lazy and can't be bothered coming up with a user name DO you know how hard it is to get one! everything and i eman everything youd ever think of using is gone!
and that so wasn't just a kiss Noach is delusional and ruth believed him too easily. I want to say tomorrow for an update but im fairly certain that would be pushing my luck. Hope it comes in like the next week though. cuz that would be like brilliant.
Okay so when i said update tomorrow in my last review i so didn't think you would. But i decided to check back and low and behold - who says that by the way. low and behold. what the? - you have not only updated once but twice! thus you are amazing! :)
I am aware I should get an account and sign in for all this reviewing stuff, but truth be told iam a bit lazy and can't be bothered coming up with a user name DO you know how hard it is to get one! everything and i eman everything youd ever think of using is gone!
and that so wasn't just a kiss Noach is delusional and ruth believed him too easily. I want to say tomorrow for an update but im fairly certain that would be pushing my luck. Hope it comes in like the next week though. cuz that would be like brilliant.
5/19/2010 c29 
11Jessiquie
Ruth wants him, to want her more at any rater. Seems to me that she wants him to fight for her, she wants what was going on before. Pity that people are only ready for things when they seem to be long gone.
Noah's a smart man. She's most defintely repeating it like a mantra to convince herself, and he's gotten under her skin by saying so. Rude awakening for her, but so realistic. Not to mention that the kiss to end the argument not only half worked but got her thinking about it all again. Got her moving so to speak.
I really enjoyed the way you described the "It was just a kiss" comment and momment. And the fact that in the following sentence, so much was implied wihtout actually saying any of it. It was really well done.
If you were looking for an constructive critism, the only thing I have is that you spelt chocolate wrong when you mentioned the shop name. But thats being majorily picky.
Feel like being guilty tomorrow and adding another one? Pretty please :)
ohh the end of this chapter was heaps effective as well. For such a short chapter, it defintely held a punch in terms of what it delievered.
Are the guys going to make an appearance agaon soon? I love all this Ruth and Noah momments, and want more, but it just seems like they haven't been there lately and I'm sure they have some stuff to say about whats going on.
11JessiquieRuth wants him, to want her more at any rater. Seems to me that she wants him to fight for her, she wants what was going on before. Pity that people are only ready for things when they seem to be long gone.
Noah's a smart man. She's most defintely repeating it like a mantra to convince herself, and he's gotten under her skin by saying so. Rude awakening for her, but so realistic. Not to mention that the kiss to end the argument not only half worked but got her thinking about it all again. Got her moving so to speak.
I really enjoyed the way you described the "It was just a kiss" comment and momment. And the fact that in the following sentence, so much was implied wihtout actually saying any of it. It was really well done.
If you were looking for an constructive critism, the only thing I have is that you spelt chocolate wrong when you mentioned the shop name. But thats being majorily picky.
Feel like being guilty tomorrow and adding another one? Pretty please :)
ohh the end of this chapter was heaps effective as well. For such a short chapter, it defintely held a punch in terms of what it delievered.
Are the guys going to make an appearance agaon soon? I love all this Ruth and Noah momments, and want more, but it just seems like they haven't been there lately and I'm sure they have some stuff to say about whats going on.
5/19/2010 c28 1guardian-of-the-seven-sins
as much as a girl may say she hates it, she always hopes for at least one arguement to be ended abruptly by the guy kissing her ^^ i think its in our genes... ;)
1guardian-of-the-seven-sinsas much as a girl may say she hates it, she always hopes for at least one arguement to be ended abruptly by the guy kissing her ^^ i think its in our genes... ;)
5/18/2010 c28 nononononononono
You can't leave us there! Especailly since something just hapepned between them. And not for a long period of time. Can we have a second monthly offering? Like in a weeks time? or Tomorrow? Tomorrow sounds better to me :)
Don't worry about the editing too much, you seem worried about this chapter and its fine. Only thing i picked up on was that the sister seems to think that Noah should have been at work, and Ruth is under the impressiona dn said as much, that he had the day off. WOuldn't they quesiton that? Wouldn't Ruth? Seems like something she'd do. She likes to over think things.
SO tomorrow? :)
You can't leave us there! Especailly since something just hapepned between them. And not for a long period of time. Can we have a second monthly offering? Like in a weeks time? or Tomorrow? Tomorrow sounds better to me :)
Don't worry about the editing too much, you seem worried about this chapter and its fine. Only thing i picked up on was that the sister seems to think that Noah should have been at work, and Ruth is under the impressiona dn said as much, that he had the day off. WOuldn't they quesiton that? Wouldn't Ruth? Seems like something she'd do. She likes to over think things.
SO tomorrow? :)
5/18/2010 c28 11Jessiquie
OMG OMG OMG! Firstly, thankyou a million for updating. Secondly, finally! I really enjoyed this chapter. It dealt with so much, and rather subtly. Good job. I was begining to wonder when they'd get around to even referencing their issues from six years ago. Naww, Noah is protective, as is Ruth of him quietly.
Ruth and her sister have a really beautiful relationship too. Glad that she has two strong fmaily members thats shes close to.
Can't wait to read the next one... judging from your A/N its going to be a long month before the next one comes up
11JessiquieOMG OMG OMG! Firstly, thankyou a million for updating. Secondly, finally! I really enjoyed this chapter. It dealt with so much, and rather subtly. Good job. I was begining to wonder when they'd get around to even referencing their issues from six years ago. Naww, Noah is protective, as is Ruth of him quietly.
Ruth and her sister have a really beautiful relationship too. Glad that she has two strong fmaily members thats shes close to.
Can't wait to read the next one... judging from your A/N its going to be a long month before the next one comes up
5/18/2010 c28 5Priceless93
Oh, I do so love Ruth and Noah. :DD I first started reading your story because one of my best friends is named Ruth, and I'm so glad I did, because it's a very engaging story that doesn't fall into all the cliches, which I love. I hope you update soon! Can't wait for the next chapter. :3
5Priceless93Oh, I do so love Ruth and Noah. :DD I first started reading your story because one of my best friends is named Ruth, and I'm so glad I did, because it's a very engaging story that doesn't fall into all the cliches, which I love. I hope you update soon! Can't wait for the next chapter. :3
5/18/2010 c27 charmed
this story is sort of amazing. I realy haven't read anything like it. who would have thought to mix dancing and politics really? I can't wait for Ruthg and him to get together. Their like a match made in heaven. why though does he claim that its his job to run away from people in this chapter? I though Ruth got freaked out and ran. Oh wells, I hope you update soon. I think i'm going to like reguarlarly check this once a week to see if theres an update. Its so much more interesting then the book i'm trying to read.update soon kay?
this story is sort of amazing. I realy haven't read anything like it. who would have thought to mix dancing and politics really? I can't wait for Ruthg and him to get together. Their like a match made in heaven. why though does he claim that its his job to run away from people in this chapter? I though Ruth got freaked out and ran. Oh wells, I hope you update soon. I think i'm going to like reguarlarly check this once a week to see if theres an update. Its so much more interesting then the book i'm trying to read.update soon kay?
3/16/2010 c26 3phelps112
so just refound the story. I like the change in writing, and Ruth seems a little more...confident in herself. I can't wait to read more. What about her eating disorder though? And even though she gave Isaac permission, wouldn't be a little awkward knowing your sister once slept with your husband?
3phelps112so just refound the story. I like the change in writing, and Ruth seems a little more...confident in herself. I can't wait to read more. What about her eating disorder though? And even though she gave Isaac permission, wouldn't be a little awkward knowing your sister once slept with your husband?
3/12/2010 c26 KittyKatLover
Interesting story you have. I usually don't go for this type of plot but I'm enjoying your story. Update soon please!
Interesting story you have. I usually don't go for this type of plot but I'm enjoying your story. Update soon please!
3/11/2010 c26 12Lilly Wattenberg
I've fallen in love with your story. I have a question though. Does Ruth still have an eating disorder after all this time? I hope to read more of the story soon.
12Lilly WattenbergI've fallen in love with your story. I have a question though. Does Ruth still have an eating disorder after all this time? I hope to read more of the story soon.
3/10/2010 c26 11Jessiquie
OKays, as usual you fully made my day. I never know when your going to update anything, but you always seem to update when I least expect it and seem to be having a diffouclt day. I.e today I'm utterly exhausted and terribly afraid i'm coming down with the buy that everyone else seems to have had in the last few weeks. I don't want it. And I have to work tonight. Thus i love you A/N! So true. And i really enjoyed the fact that this chapter kind of showed a little bit of it. That things can be going so unexpectedly perfect, and then somethings comes in and recks the dynamics completely.
Wow Ruth has grown so much, I love it. And Boo to Elsa who just waltz's right in there and ruins their perfect night. The dinner scene was so cute. Absoutely adorable. And I'm cheering because Ruth stood up for herself against Elsa! Go Ruth!
I still think you write beautifully and this chapter defintely makes me think so even more. I'm so hooked on this, can't wait to see what happens. :)
11JessiquieOKays, as usual you fully made my day. I never know when your going to update anything, but you always seem to update when I least expect it and seem to be having a diffouclt day. I.e today I'm utterly exhausted and terribly afraid i'm coming down with the buy that everyone else seems to have had in the last few weeks. I don't want it. And I have to work tonight. Thus i love you A/N! So true. And i really enjoyed the fact that this chapter kind of showed a little bit of it. That things can be going so unexpectedly perfect, and then somethings comes in and recks the dynamics completely.
Wow Ruth has grown so much, I love it. And Boo to Elsa who just waltz's right in there and ruins their perfect night. The dinner scene was so cute. Absoutely adorable. And I'm cheering because Ruth stood up for herself against Elsa! Go Ruth!
I still think you write beautifully and this chapter defintely makes me think so even more. I'm so hooked on this, can't wait to see what happens. :)