for Splits2/15/2008 c15 
14Not Dead Fred
I think what I like and appreciate most about this whole story is that your heroine is not a stick thin Barbie or some ridiculous image of what most people are inclined to believe is the epitome of beauty. And I really must say us "not so thin as to blow away at the onset of a gentle breeze or exceptionally strong bout of flatulence" girls are statistically cast away when writers pander to the dictates of the media and fashion.
Wow that was more a longwinded way of saying I really like this story and can't wait for an update.
~NDF~
14Not Dead FredI think what I like and appreciate most about this whole story is that your heroine is not a stick thin Barbie or some ridiculous image of what most people are inclined to believe is the epitome of beauty. And I really must say us "not so thin as to blow away at the onset of a gentle breeze or exceptionally strong bout of flatulence" girls are statistically cast away when writers pander to the dictates of the media and fashion.
Wow that was more a longwinded way of saying I really like this story and can't wait for an update.
~NDF~
2/14/2008 c1 1claretmadeira
Ha ha! I already have my right and left splits, and am almost at my center (I know, a la second, yada). :)
Luvin' the story, love anything 'bout dancing, haha.
1claretmadeiraHa ha! I already have my right and left splits, and am almost at my center (I know, a la second, yada). :)
Luvin' the story, love anything 'bout dancing, haha.
2/14/2008 c15 3I Quoth Nevermore
I must say, this, for some reason, is one of my favorite chapters. I guess I just like how you depicted the characters here. I can't wait to see how the story progresses! Update soon!
3I Quoth NevermoreI must say, this, for some reason, is one of my favorite chapters. I guess I just like how you depicted the characters here. I can't wait to see how the story progresses! Update soon!
2/13/2008 c14 Cassie
Hey. Sorry i don't have an email address (so i can't sign up), i just wanted to let you know that this story is Fantastic. I've been slowly reading it the past couple of weeks, and I commend you on your high standard of writing. You defiantely kept me wanting more.
I've noticed you haven't really updated in a while, or at all this year, are you planning on continuing it?
For my sake, and the 81 other people who have reviewed I hope so.
Cassie
Cassie
Hey. Sorry i don't have an email address (so i can't sign up), i just wanted to let you know that this story is Fantastic. I've been slowly reading it the past couple of weeks, and I commend you on your high standard of writing. You defiantely kept me wanting more.
I've noticed you haven't really updated in a while, or at all this year, are you planning on continuing it?
For my sake, and the 81 other people who have reviewed I hope so.
Cassie
Cassie
12/27/2007 c14 zoule
Oh is Jake trying to win her back? I'm all for it as long as it gets Noah a little green ;)
Oh is Jake trying to win her back? I'm all for it as long as it gets Noah a little green ;)
12/26/2007 c14 Miz Em
And the hits just keep on coming. I like that this story reads like real life, things are unexpected, but do tell me they'll come together nicely like a story ought. ^_^ I'm enjoying it though! Ruth is such a classy character, great to read!
And the hits just keep on coming. I like that this story reads like real life, things are unexpected, but do tell me they'll come together nicely like a story ought. ^_^ I'm enjoying it though! Ruth is such a classy character, great to read!
12/26/2007 c14 9Delta Echoes
To me you made him to vulnerable for me to dislike, but then I always feel the opposite of what the writer intends it would seem.
9Delta EchoesTo me you made him to vulnerable for me to dislike, but then I always feel the opposite of what the writer intends it would seem.
12/26/2007 c14 Unsociably Acceptable
thats good, having asses in a story makes it easier to hate someone ;)
thats good, having asses in a story makes it easier to hate someone ;)
12/26/2007 c14 3I Quoth Nevermore
Aw. Jakey must lurve Ruth. Maybe. Actually, I don't know. Noah and Ruth all the way! Anyways...I can't wait to see how those visits go. You will write them, won't you? And I wonder who the chaperone will be. Please update soon!
3I Quoth NevermoreAw. Jakey must lurve Ruth. Maybe. Actually, I don't know. Noah and Ruth all the way! Anyways...I can't wait to see how those visits go. You will write them, won't you? And I wonder who the chaperone will be. Please update soon!
12/23/2007 c13 zoule
She needs to be vindictive and evil and vengeful (as a woman scorned...). Just kidding. Great chappie :)
She needs to be vindictive and evil and vengeful (as a woman scorned...). Just kidding. Great chappie :)
12/23/2007 c13 I Quoth Nevermore
Wow. Ruth is caught up in all sorts of trouble. Great for the plot ^_^ I hope you update soon!
Wow. Ruth is caught up in all sorts of trouble. Great for the plot ^_^ I hope you update soon!