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4/17/2009 c1 May Elizabeth
Long live faerie magick. Brightest blessings.
5/24/2008 c1 6Hed in the Cloudz
I love the perfect rhymes and the subject of this poem! I've read warnings, invitations, and mourning songs about the fae, but never something like this, and I like it! Very creative, and beautifully written!

I am, however, a little confused. I'm not all that good at reading quality poetry, I guess, but I don't understand who the statues in the second stanza are. Are they the ones who would spoil faerie for children, or someone entirely different? This confusion is my only complaint, I guess. Is there any way that you could explain it for idiots like me without losing the beautiful flow of the poem?

Thanks for letting me read, and sorry for my semi-useless criticism!

- Yna, the Review Marathon (see the link in my profile!
6/28/2007 c1 6Carmel March
Beautiful. That was absolutely wonderful. Good job :)
3/21/2007 c1 12Bonjour Skitty
This is beautiful! Even though I am Christian, I believe and see the existance of fairies..and the fourth stanza captures the emotions I feel about them perfectly. Wonderfully written, I'm adding it as a favorite!

~Much love,

Bleached Roses
3/19/2007 c1 33Your Different October
I really like this, especially the first couple verses.

Very well done. :)

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