for Sans Grandeur3/19/2007 c1 Orual
Wow. That last stanza was hard-hitting, to say the least. That is the sort of poetry that makes the reader squirm. The man saying "useless" reminds me of the preacher calling "vanity." A reminder of Ecclesiates is always a bonus with me. I just love the way this was put together. Brilliant, brilliant work.
Wow. That last stanza was hard-hitting, to say the least. That is the sort of poetry that makes the reader squirm. The man saying "useless" reminds me of the preacher calling "vanity." A reminder of Ecclesiates is always a bonus with me. I just love the way this was put together. Brilliant, brilliant work.
3/18/2007 c1 bipedalcooney
Beautifully and intelligently written. I love the detail in your descriptions of everything in this poem. I really like this a lot. Great work, keep writing. And thanks so much for your review!
Beautifully and intelligently written. I love the detail in your descriptions of everything in this poem. I really like this a lot. Great work, keep writing. And thanks so much for your review!
3/17/2007 c1 
48MarvellousMarvin
i really like this! i really like all the greek myths - especially troy. the imagery here is really nice, really efective too.
thanks for the review
48MarvellousMarvini really like this! i really like all the greek myths - especially troy. the imagery here is really nice, really efective too.
thanks for the review