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12/1/2007 c1 BloodTyphoon
Hey, I know it's been a while, been doing stuff, sorry for the long absence. Anyway, I've checked out this first chapter that you re-did. So, I definitely like it, and I can see the improvements you've made upon the characters early on, and that's awesome. It's very good overall development, and I can't wait to read the rest of it. Nice work.
3/16/2007 c1 6Crewger
Just some grammar problems, other than that, you have very good character development

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