for Third Time's the Charm3/1/2015 c1 Guest
Love this. I am very glad the ending was not a sad one.
Love this. I am very glad the ending was not a sad one.
11/27/2012 c1 Dandy352
It's cute :)
It's cute :)
3/20/2011 c1 Bubbly Girl
Super cute and I really like the different approach that you used! Great job! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
~Bubbly Girl
Super cute and I really like the different approach that you used! Great job! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
~Bubbly Girl
2/14/2010 c1 
5Cecily Mitchell
So cute! (Although cute might not be what you want to hear.) I like it. It's a different to attack a tried and true storyline. Love it :)
5Cecily MitchellSo cute! (Although cute might not be what you want to hear.) I like it. It's a different to attack a tried and true storyline. Love it :)
12/25/2009 c1 anna
AW! The ending just made me go "so swet!" like a happy little girl. This is such a nice one-shot! And the length's just right. Great job!:)
AW! The ending just made me go "so swet!" like a happy little girl. This is such a nice one-shot! And the length's just right. Great job!:)
9/22/2009 c1 Leila
I am absolutely in love with this.
I am absolutely in love with this.
11/4/2008 c1 DLETE THIS OLD
I'm glad you chose to use a happy ending for this :) otherwise it wouldn't be such a nice story
I'm glad you chose to use a happy ending for this :) otherwise it wouldn't be such a nice story
8/4/2008 c1 11the ignorance of it all
Oh my. Absolutely beautiful. Some people try so hard to write simply yet beautifully, but fail misery. You, my dear, have succeeded in making it look effortless. You conjure perfect images of your characters in the readers' head, using only a half of a line.
Simply amazing.
11the ignorance of it allOh my. Absolutely beautiful. Some people try so hard to write simply yet beautifully, but fail misery. You, my dear, have succeeded in making it look effortless. You conjure perfect images of your characters in the readers' head, using only a half of a line.
Simply amazing.
6/5/2008 c1 centenarian
Well...At first I was confused with the second person thing but I got it figured out. Well, it's nice to have a guy's POV I suppose. It's cute. Real cute. So happy for them, really I am. Hey, I just rhymed. Ahem. Anyways. good job, it was short but nice.
Well...At first I was confused with the second person thing but I got it figured out. Well, it's nice to have a guy's POV I suppose. It's cute. Real cute. So happy for them, really I am. Hey, I just rhymed. Ahem. Anyways. good job, it was short but nice.
3/3/2008 c1 Fer
Wow! Very nice, I love how you told it all in a very simple and lovely way...
Congratulations!
Wow! Very nice, I love how you told it all in a very simple and lovely way...
Congratulations!
1/9/2008 c1 forever
Lucky that i read the happy ending one then eh? I like happy endings.
Lucky that i read the happy ending one then eh? I like happy endings.