
3/17/2007 c1
102Midnight In Eden
I quite like this. Complete things though, what's with the bracket before the italicized section? I think a mistake? Also I'm unsure about the "and" before truth in the third section. I don't think it's at all necessary, it's actually more jarring than anything else.
Otehrwise, nice work.
.:midnight;

I quite like this. Complete things though, what's with the bracket before the italicized section? I think a mistake? Also I'm unsure about the "and" before truth in the third section. I don't think it's at all necessary, it's actually more jarring than anything else.
Otehrwise, nice work.
.:midnight;