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3/18/2007 c1 78Ironic Presence
Very dark poem, very true. I like the opening line and the last two:

"Our world is but a shadow"..."But when it is time to stand and see our flaws/It will be too late".

Keep writing!
3/18/2007 c1 59radioactive stanica
This is very deep and dark. Death is the end of life, but I would like to add this to my C2!

Best Wishes!

(TSP)

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