
3/18/2007 c1
78Ironic Presence
Very dark poem, very true. I like the opening line and the last two:
"Our world is but a shadow"..."But when it is time to stand and see our flaws/It will be too late".
Keep writing!

Very dark poem, very true. I like the opening line and the last two:
"Our world is but a shadow"..."But when it is time to stand and see our flaws/It will be too late".
Keep writing!
3/18/2007 c1
59radioactive stanica
This is very deep and dark. Death is the end of life, but I would like to add this to my C2!
Best Wishes!
(TSP)

This is very deep and dark. Death is the end of life, but I would like to add this to my C2!
Best Wishes!
(TSP)