for Cerulean Harbor5/24/2008 c62 
1thoughtdancer
i rly enjoyed this chapter, and it was so different from what i expected! I hope Madison and Dareick are together. THx for updating.
1thoughtdanceri rly enjoyed this chapter, and it was so different from what i expected! I hope Madison and Dareick are together. THx for updating.
5/24/2008 c62 reader
These people are really just too emotionally fucked up, but at least you do a good job of portraying their emotions and their "reasons" for what they do.
Anyway, thank you for sharing your work; it's very intriguing.
These people are really just too emotionally fucked up, but at least you do a good job of portraying their emotions and their "reasons" for what they do.
Anyway, thank you for sharing your work; it's very intriguing.
5/23/2008 c48 reader
This story is soo elaborate. I admire it, but at the same time I feel like there is just too much subterfuge and conspiracy...
Anyway, I think you've managed an amazing feat with this story. And I really think you've struck upon so many truths in life here.
This story is soo elaborate. I admire it, but at the same time I feel like there is just too much subterfuge and conspiracy...
Anyway, I think you've managed an amazing feat with this story. And I really think you've struck upon so many truths in life here.
5/23/2008 c39 reader
I'm pretty sick of Brianna and her mess. It's way past a love triangle. I thought it was healthy of Brianna to say no to Brad and Caleb. Brad needs to get over himself, esp since he's already married.
I'm pretty sick of Brianna and her mess. It's way past a love triangle. I thought it was healthy of Brianna to say no to Brad and Caleb. Brad needs to get over himself, esp since he's already married.
5/23/2008 c62 Usurp Authority
I thought Madison's dark secret was that she murdered someone. I never thought that she would turn out to be a Kincade. Now all those people who humilated and harassed her because they thought she was poor, will have to suck up to her and treat her like a queen. And what about Thomas? Didn't he attempt to rape her? Will he apologize? Will Grady's mom still try to get Grady to get her pregnant? And will Grady still like her now that she's rich? Will Dorian's family accept her now that she could own them? LOL You'd think Darick's family would want Darick and Madison to fall in love and get married. This is so fucking hilarious! I have so many questions...its too bad I have to wait every week when you post new chapters to get any answers.
The twins knew who she was and yet Arion still blackmailed her? What an idiot! So Micky is the Miss Kincade that tried to fuck Darick? lol And she's addicted to drugs and shit? lol
I kinda wish that Brianna will fall in love with Thomas and out of love with Ian. Wait! What about the girl that Allan likes now? The one that looks just like Madison? Is she somehow related to Madison? That would be hilarious if she was!
I'm getting sick of Brianna. How can she not control herself around other guys? She's always kissing other guys...its like she has some weird mental disorder like tourettes where you can't control random outbursts..only with kissing. (Kissourettes lol)
I didn't like Emily in the beginning but now I want her and Caleb to get back together. This is all I can think of for now...I can't wait till next week to find out what else happens in this soap opera. lol
I thought Madison's dark secret was that she murdered someone. I never thought that she would turn out to be a Kincade. Now all those people who humilated and harassed her because they thought she was poor, will have to suck up to her and treat her like a queen. And what about Thomas? Didn't he attempt to rape her? Will he apologize? Will Grady's mom still try to get Grady to get her pregnant? And will Grady still like her now that she's rich? Will Dorian's family accept her now that she could own them? LOL You'd think Darick's family would want Darick and Madison to fall in love and get married. This is so fucking hilarious! I have so many questions...its too bad I have to wait every week when you post new chapters to get any answers.
The twins knew who she was and yet Arion still blackmailed her? What an idiot! So Micky is the Miss Kincade that tried to fuck Darick? lol And she's addicted to drugs and shit? lol
I kinda wish that Brianna will fall in love with Thomas and out of love with Ian. Wait! What about the girl that Allan likes now? The one that looks just like Madison? Is she somehow related to Madison? That would be hilarious if she was!
I'm getting sick of Brianna. How can she not control herself around other guys? She's always kissing other guys...its like she has some weird mental disorder like tourettes where you can't control random outbursts..only with kissing. (Kissourettes lol)
I didn't like Emily in the beginning but now I want her and Caleb to get back together. This is all I can think of for now...I can't wait till next week to find out what else happens in this soap opera. lol
5/23/2008 c21 reader
Who would complain about how they SPEAK?
That's ridiculous. I think that they way you have created these characters-their detail, their mannerisms, etc.-is wonderful.
Who would complain about how they SPEAK?
That's ridiculous. I think that they way you have created these characters-their detail, their mannerisms, etc.-is wonderful.
5/22/2008 c62 Shelley
WOW! I totally did not see that coming. Madison is a kincade! i love it!
WOW! I totally did not see that coming. Madison is a kincade! i love it!
5/21/2008 c62 19Lady Gisele
Wow. I didn't expect that twist in the story! Can't wait to see what awaits for Darick and Madison!
19Lady GiseleWow. I didn't expect that twist in the story! Can't wait to see what awaits for Darick and Madison!
5/21/2008 c62 ShorT.and.SweeT00
AH YARG! AH!
JEEZUZ brianna just makes me so freaking mad sometimes!
and freakin Darick UGH I FEL SO BAD FOR HIM BUT HE CAN BE SUCH A DUMBASS! WHICH MAKES ME MAD AT HIM TOO!
Madison is totally pouring her life story out, WHICH SHE SHOULD HAVE DONE FOR HIM EARLIER and he has to go and give up on their love and crap.
UGH! alskdfjlskjfdlkajsdlfjk
... so.. Great story! LOVING IT, as always.. =D
AH YARG! AH!
JEEZUZ brianna just makes me so freaking mad sometimes!
and freakin Darick UGH I FEL SO BAD FOR HIM BUT HE CAN BE SUCH A DUMBASS! WHICH MAKES ME MAD AT HIM TOO!
Madison is totally pouring her life story out, WHICH SHE SHOULD HAVE DONE FOR HIM EARLIER and he has to go and give up on their love and crap.
UGH! alskdfjlskjfdlkajsdlfjk
... so.. Great story! LOVING IT, as always.. =D
5/21/2008 c8 reader
I love the character development.
I love the character development.
5/21/2008 c62 1glamoureste
arg... i read 63 on your form.
ugh. i don't want dorian to come back.
i think he and abigal need to get out of the picture so madison and darick can have a good life together.
really really great story, though! :]
1glamourestearg... i read 63 on your form.
ugh. i don't want dorian to come back.
i think he and abigal need to get out of the picture so madison and darick can have a good life together.
really really great story, though! :]
5/21/2008 c62 HazeleyedHoney
I love it! Now Darick is the poor boy and Madison is the rich girl! I like how you don't focus on just one couple but a bunch of couples.
I love it! Now Darick is the poor boy and Madison is the rich girl! I like how you don't focus on just one couple but a bunch of couples.
5/21/2008 c62 inFEARandFAITH
Oh no! I hope that author's note wasn't directed at me. :(
I didn't mean to make it sound like I was rushing you. I like the pace you're going!
Oh no! I hope that author's note wasn't directed at me. :(
I didn't mean to make it sound like I was rushing you. I like the pace you're going!