
7/31/2009 c23
1Candescence
Haha! I loved the ending. I half expected Madison to run up and kiss him. That would've been something.

Haha! I loved the ending. I half expected Madison to run up and kiss him. That would've been something.
7/11/2009 c62
1JenniVu
Madison is a Kincade...WOW! I kinda guessed that she was someone rich but I never knew she would be a KINCADE. No offense or anything but this story is a tad bit to long for me. I'm mostly jsut skimming over all the other things until I get to the part with Madison. NO OFFESE! Your story is FANTASTIC I would jsut rather read about Madison more. After I finish reading the sotry, I'm gonna re-read it so that I can read the parts that I skimmed.

Madison is a Kincade...WOW! I kinda guessed that she was someone rich but I never knew she would be a KINCADE. No offense or anything but this story is a tad bit to long for me. I'm mostly jsut skimming over all the other things until I get to the part with Madison. NO OFFESE! Your story is FANTASTIC I would jsut rather read about Madison more. After I finish reading the sotry, I'm gonna re-read it so that I can read the parts that I skimmed.
7/11/2009 c60 JenniVu
OMG! He FINALLY had sex. I'm surprised! WOW! I'm glad its Madison he lost his virginity to.
OMG! He FINALLY had sex. I'm surprised! WOW! I'm glad its Madison he lost his virginity to.
7/6/2009 c17 JenniVu
I thought that Brad didn't have a mother. You explained it in one of the earlier chapters...
I thought that Brad didn't have a mother. You explained it in one of the earlier chapters...
7/4/2009 c1 JenniVu
I don't get it. Are the Rags the poorest families out of the school (Other then the charity people) but still rich?
I don't get it. Are the Rags the poorest families out of the school (Other then the charity people) but still rich?
7/4/2009 c19 Anonymous
no! why is arion doing this? she has to choose btwn darick and dorian! noo! love this story :]
no! why is arion doing this? she has to choose btwn darick and dorian! noo! love this story :]
7/4/2009 c19 Anonymous
Omg! tabitha is a lesbian! nice twist ;]
Omg! tabitha is a lesbian! nice twist ;]
6/28/2009 c7 Anonymous
You are a truly amazing author!
You are a truly amazing author!
6/15/2009 c100 me
i absolutely loved it! i am so glad to have come across this story. it was incredibly well written and i was kept on my toes waiting to see where the plot would turn next. thanks for writing!
i absolutely loved it! i am so glad to have come across this story. it was incredibly well written and i was kept on my toes waiting to see where the plot would turn next. thanks for writing!
5/25/2009 c100 AsianPearl101
Wow! that's not at al what thought it would be like in the end. But it was still a really great ending and I liked it alot. and now that you're done with this story, can you please start wriing Lotus Blossom? PLEASE!
Thanks
Wow! that's not at al what thought it would be like in the end. But it was still a really great ending and I liked it alot. and now that you're done with this story, can you please start wriing Lotus Blossom? PLEASE!
Thanks
4/26/2009 c1 Reader
read your story a while back but fell behind in chapters
now i've just come back from watching hana yori dango the drama(korean version)
and have a new found appreciation for your adaptation of the story
it made things more fun for me... before the story seemed to be dragging, but now i know which characters are who from the real story and etc.
i'm still behind in the manga though.. but everyone is saying the drama is better anyway
i guess i just thought i'd let you know you have another reader who will probably stick around =P
wow... how self important did that sound...
anyway, i'm having fun reading your story
i hope you're having fun writing it
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keep on keeping on
Reader
read your story a while back but fell behind in chapters
now i've just come back from watching hana yori dango the drama(korean version)
and have a new found appreciation for your adaptation of the story
it made things more fun for me... before the story seemed to be dragging, but now i know which characters are who from the real story and etc.
i'm still behind in the manga though.. but everyone is saying the drama is better anyway
i guess i just thought i'd let you know you have another reader who will probably stick around =P
wow... how self important did that sound...
anyway, i'm having fun reading your story
i hope you're having fun writing it
-
keep on keeping on
Reader
3/31/2009 c100
1Crimsonlover4
Oh my friggin goodness! Talk about coming full circle! Though I'm not exactly jumping up and down with joy, I have to say that I loved how you managed to tie everything together in terms of how their relationship started/end and I commend you for delivering such a great piece. The way you've written up the characters and how each one developed in their own way was wonderful/skillful, to the point where they became real people with real issues so I guess the ending is fitting for the course of the story since it shows ppl don't always get the endings they want. I know I'm going on and on about this but its just that this story transcend itself into something else and that was all due to your handy/trusty writing skills. Thank you very much for sharing this work with us and I hope you'll continue to deliver such great pieces... okay, i promise I'll be done after saying THANK YOU! :)

Oh my friggin goodness! Talk about coming full circle! Though I'm not exactly jumping up and down with joy, I have to say that I loved how you managed to tie everything together in terms of how their relationship started/end and I commend you for delivering such a great piece. The way you've written up the characters and how each one developed in their own way was wonderful/skillful, to the point where they became real people with real issues so I guess the ending is fitting for the course of the story since it shows ppl don't always get the endings they want. I know I'm going on and on about this but its just that this story transcend itself into something else and that was all due to your handy/trusty writing skills. Thank you very much for sharing this work with us and I hope you'll continue to deliver such great pieces... okay, i promise I'll be done after saying THANK YOU! :)
3/31/2009 c100 Ugh
Bo. :(
Bo. :(