for Cerulean Harbor5/8/2007 c12 The Banshee's Tears
tis fic is great...beyond complicated, but great! its complications make it so intriguing and captivating. cant wait for an update so i an see what happens next. im really not a fan of arion or alan. oddly enough, darrick seems to be better for madison and im pretty much dying in anticipation of the next chapter. story and author are definently going on my favorites lists.
tis fic is great...beyond complicated, but great! its complications make it so intriguing and captivating. cant wait for an update so i an see what happens next. im really not a fan of arion or alan. oddly enough, darrick seems to be better for madison and im pretty much dying in anticipation of the next chapter. story and author are definently going on my favorites lists.
5/7/2007 c12 
12sunflowersing
Okay. So we know that Derik and Maddison are in deep denial of their attraction to each other. When will they realize this? Or do they already know, and they just don't want to acknowlege it? I think that it was good that Alan moved out. There was no need to prolong the agony of being with someone when its only a one-sided relationship. Don't you think? I am amazed at how few errors I find in your writing. This probably means you do a lot of editing, which I admit, is not one of my favorite parts of writing. It is however important. In many stories on this website, it is evident who edits and who does not. I must say, that this story is not a simple one with a single plot, which is hard for many writers to acomplish. 'Cerulean Harbor' has more than one plot going on, which makes the story all the more interesting. Keep up the great work!
sunflowersing
12sunflowersingOkay. So we know that Derik and Maddison are in deep denial of their attraction to each other. When will they realize this? Or do they already know, and they just don't want to acknowlege it? I think that it was good that Alan moved out. There was no need to prolong the agony of being with someone when its only a one-sided relationship. Don't you think? I am amazed at how few errors I find in your writing. This probably means you do a lot of editing, which I admit, is not one of my favorite parts of writing. It is however important. In many stories on this website, it is evident who edits and who does not. I must say, that this story is not a simple one with a single plot, which is hard for many writers to acomplish. 'Cerulean Harbor' has more than one plot going on, which makes the story all the more interesting. Keep up the great work!
sunflowersing
5/6/2007 c12 5starmom
FIrst she sleeps with his dog and now him...things are moving up in the world for Derek. I wonder if he'll be able to keep his promise of standing by her. I'm glad her and Alan are over. I like Alan but they didn't really seem to be going anywhere.
What is Arion doing? Guess I'll have to wait and see =)
Keep up the awesome story! See ya next chapter!
FIrst she sleeps with his dog and now him...things are moving up in the world for Derek. I wonder if he'll be able to keep his promise of standing by her. I'm glad her and Alan are over. I like Alan but they didn't really seem to be going anywhere.
What is Arion doing? Guess I'll have to wait and see =)
Keep up the awesome story! See ya next chapter!
5/6/2007 c12 2Stang65
Really good update! Thought the fight between Emily and Brianna was a little tame, although the scene with Madison and Darick waking up more than made up for my disappointment about the E/B fight being tame. Oh yeah, Arion and his apology were cute, but I'm glad that Madison didn't just jump into his arms... he deserves a good, long wait to get back into her good graces.
Great job! Can't wait for the next update!
2Stang65Really good update! Thought the fight between Emily and Brianna was a little tame, although the scene with Madison and Darick waking up more than made up for my disappointment about the E/B fight being tame. Oh yeah, Arion and his apology were cute, but I'm glad that Madison didn't just jump into his arms... he deserves a good, long wait to get back into her good graces.
Great job! Can't wait for the next update!
5/6/2007 c12 Jaded2324
Hi everyone.. I am a member at her forum and I am also one of the editors for this story so I am a couple of chapters ahead.. The story is so good. There is a lot of unexpected things that happen throughout the story that will keep you VERY interested. There are some wonderful guys that appear in her life.. As well as some good friends that she meets along the way.
There are people that read this story and do not like how it is written.. This is HER story and it is how she wants to write it.. There are MANY of us who do like it written this way also.. If you do not care for the way it is written then you do not have to Read / review it as written wrong as it is NOT.
Hi everyone.. I am a member at her forum and I am also one of the editors for this story so I am a couple of chapters ahead.. The story is so good. There is a lot of unexpected things that happen throughout the story that will keep you VERY interested. There are some wonderful guys that appear in her life.. As well as some good friends that she meets along the way.
There are people that read this story and do not like how it is written.. This is HER story and it is how she wants to write it.. There are MANY of us who do like it written this way also.. If you do not care for the way it is written then you do not have to Read / review it as written wrong as it is NOT.
4/30/2007 c11 Stang65
Aha! The plot thickens! Aw, Darick let her sleep with his dog... so cute! I kinda get the feeling that even though he says otherwise, he hasn't given up on getting together with Madison. Hm, we shall see, no? Great update!
Aha! The plot thickens! Aw, Darick let her sleep with his dog... so cute! I kinda get the feeling that even though he says otherwise, he hasn't given up on getting together with Madison. Hm, we shall see, no? Great update!
4/29/2007 c11 12sunflowersing
O! Betrayal, lies, and deceit. Ah, of course it seems that the last two of those three seem closely tied to eachother. I really enjoyed this latest installment of Cerulean Harbor. By the way, I was wondering how you pronounced 'Cerulean'. I have tried voicing differnt pronunciations, but none of them seem right. Could you clear that up for us readers? I'm a bit weird about pronunciation.
I'm glad that you changed the installements to Sunday! It is very hard reading the new chapters on a school day, and I tend to have to take breaks in order to do my homework.
sunflowersing
12sunflowersingO! Betrayal, lies, and deceit. Ah, of course it seems that the last two of those three seem closely tied to eachother. I really enjoyed this latest installment of Cerulean Harbor. By the way, I was wondering how you pronounced 'Cerulean'. I have tried voicing differnt pronunciations, but none of them seem right. Could you clear that up for us readers? I'm a bit weird about pronunciation.
I'm glad that you changed the installements to Sunday! It is very hard reading the new chapters on a school day, and I tend to have to take breaks in order to do my homework.
sunflowersing
4/23/2007 c10 12sunflowersing
I think Derek and Maddison might have something going for them! GREAT CHAPTER! I feel so empty inside though, thinking its going to be a whole week before you update again. A WHOLE WEEK! That is way too long! Ah! Is there us readers can do to get you to update more? Ah... I'm a greedy reader I suppose. You update very often by comparison to other stories... I guess I just want more... :-D Every day I send/recieve on my outlook hoping that with some miniscule chance you updated your story. I am addicted to this website. Anyway, I LOVE this story!
Keep the keyboard tapping
sunflowersing
12sunflowersingI think Derek and Maddison might have something going for them! GREAT CHAPTER! I feel so empty inside though, thinking its going to be a whole week before you update again. A WHOLE WEEK! That is way too long! Ah! Is there us readers can do to get you to update more? Ah... I'm a greedy reader I suppose. You update very often by comparison to other stories... I guess I just want more... :-D Every day I send/recieve on my outlook hoping that with some miniscule chance you updated your story. I am addicted to this website. Anyway, I LOVE this story!
Keep the keyboard tapping
sunflowersing
4/23/2007 c10 Alex
I love this story. Please let Madison end up with Arion. I don't think she and Derek are a great match. Can't wait till the next update.
Alex
I love this story. Please let Madison end up with Arion. I don't think she and Derek are a great match. Can't wait till the next update.
Alex