for Cerulean Harbor4/2/2007 c7 
12sunflowersing
Yay! Awesome chapter! Don't give up Derek! :-( I'm excited for the next update on Monday.
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12sunflowersingYay! Awesome chapter! Don't give up Derek! :-( I'm excited for the next update on Monday.
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4/2/2007 c6 5starmom
Just wanted to know I'm loving the story! (read Ch 7 on your website) Can not wait for more...but I guess I have to don't I. :P
Keep up the awesome work!
Just wanted to know I'm loving the story! (read Ch 7 on your website) Can not wait for more...but I guess I have to don't I. :P
Keep up the awesome work!
4/2/2007 c7 1Amashandel
I really like your story, Madison is a great girl and I admire the way she behaves, darick is crazy but somehow i really like him, hope to read more realy son!
1AmashandelI really like your story, Madison is a great girl and I admire the way she behaves, darick is crazy but somehow i really like him, hope to read more realy son!
3/26/2007 c6 12sunflowersing
WOW! A lot happened in this chapter. I am really starting to like Derek. I thought I'd never say that. Now that stupid f*ing b*tch Kate made Derek doubt himself! Argh! This story gets me so involved! Okay, so I know you said you update only on Mondays, but can we come up with a compromise? How bout this Saturday? Okay. Thats not much time. Sunday? 9:00 pm? AH I don't think I can wait a WHOLE ENTIRE WEEK without having severe stress causing me to break out. We don't want that now do we? So to ensure my mental sanity (and yours), I beg of you to update as soon as you finish the chapter. Okay, I'm being ridicusous, but I can't help myself sometimes. Okay now. So in conclusion of those MANY sentences, that I could have said in one: UPDATE SON!
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12sunflowersingWOW! A lot happened in this chapter. I am really starting to like Derek. I thought I'd never say that. Now that stupid f*ing b*tch Kate made Derek doubt himself! Argh! This story gets me so involved! Okay, so I know you said you update only on Mondays, but can we come up with a compromise? How bout this Saturday? Okay. Thats not much time. Sunday? 9:00 pm? AH I don't think I can wait a WHOLE ENTIRE WEEK without having severe stress causing me to break out. We don't want that now do we? So to ensure my mental sanity (and yours), I beg of you to update as soon as you finish the chapter. Okay, I'm being ridicusous, but I can't help myself sometimes. Okay now. So in conclusion of those MANY sentences, that I could have said in one: UPDATE SON!
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3/22/2007 c5 3Darkest Dream
you update fast!
can i ask a question? why did you let alan have madison?
I like Darick more. hehe,
keep up the good story.
3Darkest Dreamyou update fast!
can i ask a question? why did you let alan have madison?
I like Darick more. hehe,
keep up the good story.
3/21/2007 c5 12sunflowersing
That was an excellent chapter you wrote! I cant wait to see what becomes of these tangled up love lives. Would comment more, but homework to be done before I get caught reading when I'm not supposed to. And again... I beg of you... UPDATE SOON!
sunflowersing
12sunflowersingThat was an excellent chapter you wrote! I cant wait to see what becomes of these tangled up love lives. Would comment more, but homework to be done before I get caught reading when I'm not supposed to. And again... I beg of you... UPDATE SOON!
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3/21/2007 c5 Penny
i think that madison and alan should be together, the other guys dont seem very nice. The story is good.
i think that madison and alan should be together, the other guys dont seem very nice. The story is good.
3/19/2007 c2 1Ms.Persephone
Hm...I'm interested. What got me interested was Darkick's character actually. I'm curious to see about him. I hope he doesn't end up as a two-dimensional villian.
Always a sucker for the anti-hero.
1Ms.PersephoneHm...I'm interested. What got me interested was Darkick's character actually. I'm curious to see about him. I hope he doesn't end up as a two-dimensional villian.
Always a sucker for the anti-hero.
3/19/2007 c3 12sunflowersing
Amazing story! Maxine is so sweet! She would be so fun to have around. The twins seem to be more evil in their intentions, and I thought I'd never say this... Darick is starting to sound like the sweetie. Even if Darick does clean up his attitude, I have no doubt there will be several inncidents where he forgets his new found mannars and acts like a cave man again. Anyway, this is such and AWESOME story! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
12sunflowersingAmazing story! Maxine is so sweet! She would be so fun to have around. The twins seem to be more evil in their intentions, and I thought I'd never say this... Darick is starting to sound like the sweetie. Even if Darick does clean up his attitude, I have no doubt there will be several inncidents where he forgets his new found mannars and acts like a cave man again. Anyway, this is such and AWESOME story! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
3/19/2007 c2 1SilvinArrow
O, this has the beginning of a wonderful story! I love the characters and the idea for the story! I can't wait to read more!
-SA-
1SilvinArrowO, this has the beginning of a wonderful story! I love the characters and the idea for the story! I can't wait to read more!
-SA-