for Cerulean Harbor3/19/2007 c2 
21insane in the brain
I love this story! Your chapters are enormous... Now I feel bad about the shitty little 10 pages of crap I come up with for English class .
21insane in the brainI love this story! Your chapters are enormous... Now I feel bad about the shitty little 10 pages of crap I come up with for English class .
3/19/2007 c2 12sunflowersing
I hate Darick, and yet I admire him for his "bravery" or rather not giving up on Madison. I LOVE Madison. She is totally KICK ASS! Please update soon!
sunflowersing
12sunflowersingI hate Darick, and yet I admire him for his "bravery" or rather not giving up on Madison. I LOVE Madison. She is totally KICK ASS! Please update soon!
sunflowersing
3/19/2007 c1 sunflowersing
Amazing! Everything in here is great. Story line, plot, character and their development, love interest, writing technique and more.
sunflowersing
Amazing! Everything in here is great. Story line, plot, character and their development, love interest, writing technique and more.
sunflowersing
3/18/2007 c2 15justine dayea
sorry for not dropping by your forum lately. anyways, thank you for sharing this story with us here in fictionpress. It's a bit different from your other works, but still, it has your signature all over it.
keep up the good work.
-melai
15justine dayeasorry for not dropping by your forum lately. anyways, thank you for sharing this story with us here in fictionpress. It's a bit different from your other works, but still, it has your signature all over it.
keep up the good work.
-melai