for grinding my teeth5/21/2007 c1 
9stalkerlesson101
this is a truly fantasitc piece of poetry! I'm really glad i stumbled across this. Your rhyme scheme is interesting and the point is totally in your face. i loved this poem! this will definitly go on my favorite stories list!
9stalkerlesson101this is a truly fantasitc piece of poetry! I'm really glad i stumbled across this. Your rhyme scheme is interesting and the point is totally in your face. i loved this poem! this will definitly go on my favorite stories list!
4/2/2007 c1 63lackluster
i love the rhyming scheme. it made my day, because deep down i know i'm in love with rhyming poems, it's just a denial thing.
63lacklusteri love the rhyming scheme. it made my day, because deep down i know i'm in love with rhyming poems, it's just a denial thing.
3/27/2007 c1 124Tipped
i like this. and i dont usually enjoy rhyming poetry. but this was blunt and beautiful and i loved it.
124Tippedi like this. and i dont usually enjoy rhyming poetry. but this was blunt and beautiful and i loved it.
3/19/2007 c1 49Toxic.Industrial.Waste
"stab me to pieces and
say goodbye because
a promise not worth keeping is
as good as a lie"
I don't think I have ever heard this before, but such a great point.
I love it.
The only thing is the translation from the line
"and now i regret"
to
"stab me to pieces and"
seems a bit awkward. In general this was an amazing poem, just that one line. It doest ruin the poem at all, though. Which is hard to do.
49Toxic.Industrial.Waste"stab me to pieces and
say goodbye because
a promise not worth keeping is
as good as a lie"
I don't think I have ever heard this before, but such a great point.
I love it.
The only thing is the translation from the line
"and now i regret"
to
"stab me to pieces and"
seems a bit awkward. In general this was an amazing poem, just that one line. It doest ruin the poem at all, though. Which is hard to do.
3/19/2007 c1 134whispered something profound
Borgeous. Spectacular. Phenomenal. I love it all. I can't pick a fovorite line because they're all my favorite. Maybe one of my favorite poems I have ever read in my life. Thank you for posting it!
134whispered something profoundBorgeous. Spectacular. Phenomenal. I love it all. I can't pick a fovorite line because they're all my favorite. Maybe one of my favorite poems I have ever read in my life. Thank you for posting it!