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5/21/2007 c1 9stalkerlesson101
this is a truly fantasitc piece of poetry! I'm really glad i stumbled across this. Your rhyme scheme is interesting and the point is totally in your face. i loved this poem! this will definitly go on my favorite stories list!
4/2/2007 c1 63lackluster
i love the rhyming scheme. it made my day, because deep down i know i'm in love with rhyming poems, it's just a denial thing.
4/1/2007 c1 83bittersweet.season
i love the last line, this flows abstractively, and i like it alot.
3/27/2007 c1 124Tipped
i like this. and i dont usually enjoy rhyming poetry. but this was blunt and beautiful and i loved it.
3/26/2007 c1 recycle rhymes
very intense, but the lack of punctation made it more so. nice work.
3/19/2007 c1 49Toxic.Industrial.Waste
"stab me to pieces and

say goodbye because

a promise not worth keeping is

as good as a lie"

I don't think I have ever heard this before, but such a great point.

I love it.

The only thing is the translation from the line

"and now i regret"

to

"stab me to pieces and"

seems a bit awkward. In general this was an amazing poem, just that one line. It doest ruin the poem at all, though. Which is hard to do.
3/19/2007 c1 134whispered something profound
Borgeous. Spectacular. Phenomenal. I love it all. I can't pick a fovorite line because they're all my favorite. Maybe one of my favorite poems I have ever read in my life. Thank you for posting it!

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