
7/26/2014 c14 Guest
AlI is such a bitch. First the party itself, then the outfit, the flirtIng... and now the kissing?! Hell I hope Alex is gonna leave her after spitting in her face
AlI is such a bitch. First the party itself, then the outfit, the flirtIng... and now the kissing?! Hell I hope Alex is gonna leave her after spitting in her face
3/24/2011 c20
2Luv'nLife101
No! You can't stop this story its so good! I will read crave but I still love this story.

No! You can't stop this story its so good! I will read crave but I still love this story.
12/31/2010 c15 TragicSyn
I liked this chapter! I think with time the sex scenes will get better... There will be more, right?
I liked this chapter! I think with time the sex scenes will get better... There will be more, right?
6/25/2010 c20 Anelir-sensei
I don't normally read rewrites if I've read the original, but this was a good story and I look forward to reading Crave ^^
I don't normally read rewrites if I've read the original, but this was a good story and I look forward to reading Crave ^^
5/7/2010 c19 dlee21
Totally love this story. You should continue it. I want to know if he could hold himself away from Ali. Alex is so hot! Really love this story. Continue please.
Totally love this story. You should continue it. I want to know if he could hold himself away from Ali. Alex is so hot! Really love this story. Continue please.
1/11/2010 c19 Imagica
you need to update SON!
you need to update SON!
12/19/2009 c19 MoonFlower77
I really love the plot of the story! To tell you the this is the first story I have read in fictionpress and I am enjoyed reading each chapter! This story is going to my favorites. Please update as soon as you can! XD
~ MoonFlower77
I really love the plot of the story! To tell you the this is the first story I have read in fictionpress and I am enjoyed reading each chapter! This story is going to my favorites. Please update as soon as you can! XD
~ MoonFlower77
10/2/2009 c19
9Destiny1406
wow... it's been almost a year since you last posted a chapter. please update soon!

wow... it's been almost a year since you last posted a chapter. please update soon!
9/26/2009 c19
11Sakiru Yume
Ack! You just left it there. No! You need to write more. More more more more more.
Sorry, that was weird. I really like this story.

Ack! You just left it there. No! You need to write more. More more more more more.
Sorry, that was weird. I really like this story.
6/30/2009 c19 Sayuri. J
What in the mother f- Oh, hey! Looks like you've got yourself a new reader :). I came across this story 2 days ago and I absolutely LOVE it!
I can't believe they were interupted at ~that~ moment *shakes head*. Another few seconds and Alex would have been "home" ¬_¬. I felt just as frustrated and as desperate as Alex when the knock came, argh!
I see you that haven't updated in quite a while... hope you update soon! I'm really lookin foward to the next chapter :)
What in the mother f- Oh, hey! Looks like you've got yourself a new reader :). I came across this story 2 days ago and I absolutely LOVE it!
I can't believe they were interupted at ~that~ moment *shakes head*. Another few seconds and Alex would have been "home" ¬_¬. I felt just as frustrated and as desperate as Alex when the knock came, argh!
I see you that haven't updated in quite a while... hope you update soon! I'm really lookin foward to the next chapter :)
4/20/2009 c7
1artificial destiny
nice chappie
small typo in the beginning 'fully clothes' i think should be 'fully clothed'

nice chappie
small typo in the beginning 'fully clothes' i think should be 'fully clothed'
4/20/2009 c5 artificial destiny
hahaha. nice chapter. wonder what shelbys doing with him if he hates her that much.
hahaha. nice chapter. wonder what shelbys doing with him if he hates her that much.
4/13/2009 c19
6Carmel March
Still loving this. I am so sorry for taking so long to review! Just know that I haven't forgotten your story :)
Hope to read more soon!
~Carm~

Still loving this. I am so sorry for taking so long to review! Just know that I haven't forgotten your story :)
Hope to read more soon!
~Carm~