for Calling11/8/2014 c1 appreciation
it was so sad yet beautifull love... :( :)
it was so sad yet beautifull love... :( :)
9/16/2014 c1 Anna
Its so good. but sad that it ended like that.
Its so good. but sad that it ended like that.
9/9/2014 c1 Guest
Oh fudge you really you made me tear up! Somehow it was ok when I read it the first time but when I re-read the lines again I teared up. Will Riley really go back? I somehow honestly doubt in a way. If he didn't catch the girl cheating he probably wouldn't be as sad. It's as if he's saying those out of guilt. God that's just sad.
Oh fudge you really you made me tear up! Somehow it was ok when I read it the first time but when I re-read the lines again I teared up. Will Riley really go back? I somehow honestly doubt in a way. If he didn't catch the girl cheating he probably wouldn't be as sad. It's as if he's saying those out of guilt. God that's just sad.
8/16/2014 c1 fangirl
OHHH this was so sad! i love it so much! i am crying buckets and omg love ur story!one of the best
OHHH this was so sad! i love it so much! i am crying buckets and omg love ur story!one of the best
3/7/2014 c1 Guest
Although I absolutely love how the story has that plot twist...it's so sad! I need a happy ending T.T
Although I absolutely love how the story has that plot twist...it's so sad! I need a happy ending T.T
9/3/2013 c1 stormic
what the ! I - hated the end ... good work...
what the ! I - hated the end ... good work...
5/3/2012 c1 
2mushplomplom
It was fast paced so I really didnt know the characters all that well.
And when he killed himself I felt no emotional attachment what so ever.
2mushplomplomIt was fast paced so I really didnt know the characters all that well.
And when he killed himself I felt no emotional attachment what so ever.
2/1/2012 c1 2Madame Penguin
I actually started to cry at the end. I know they are fictional and all, but the only thing that gets me crying for a story is when someone who they dearly love is rejected by said person and then something horrible happens to them like death. He probably wouldn't of gone back either considering the situation which just makes it all much worse.
2Madame PenguinI actually started to cry at the end. I know they are fictional and all, but the only thing that gets me crying for a story is when someone who they dearly love is rejected by said person and then something horrible happens to them like death. He probably wouldn't of gone back either considering the situation which just makes it all much worse.
12/2/2011 c1 1moon01234
Completely sad, depressing, horrible story that merits a two-thumbs up. Wonderfully written, full of emotion and a job well done.
1moon01234Completely sad, depressing, horrible story that merits a two-thumbs up. Wonderfully written, full of emotion and a job well done.
9/6/2011 c1 Hyteha
Ok, this is really mean. I knew from the start that he would probably kill himself but in the end I still had tears in my eyes. God, I hate sad endings (even if this story was beautiful...)
Ok, this is really mean. I knew from the start that he would probably kill himself but in the end I still had tears in my eyes. God, I hate sad endings (even if this story was beautiful...)
7/14/2011 c1 Mars and Kitkat
I probably reviewed this long ago when I read it, but I had to come back and re-read. This is one of the saddest stories I've ever read on here, and one of the best.
Thanks for writing it.
I probably reviewed this long ago when I read it, but I had to come back and re-read. This is one of the saddest stories I've ever read on here, and one of the best.
Thanks for writing it.
6/15/2011 c1 drlewis72116
Oh it was so sad...You kind of felt it coming but I couldn't turn away. Terribly sad ending but very honest and great to read. Thanks for writing it.
Oh it was so sad...You kind of felt it coming but I couldn't turn away. Terribly sad ending but very honest and great to read. Thanks for writing it.