for Bring it back3/21/2007 c1 
306Ashelin
Some of it didn't flow right, but I still loved it. The whole thing was terribly relatable, and wonderful. Great job.
306AshelinSome of it didn't flow right, but I still loved it. The whole thing was terribly relatable, and wonderful. Great job.
3/21/2007 c1 I Have Moved
Awesome poem... I Love poems like this, where they have alot of repetition and rhythm, it helps put across the meaning so effectively. Keep it up.. Love Ashleigh (shine brightly)
Awesome poem... I Love poems like this, where they have alot of repetition and rhythm, it helps put across the meaning so effectively. Keep it up.. Love Ashleigh (shine brightly)