for Echo4/16/2007 c9 
2His songbird
*snickers* This chappie was really cool! The tension was so DELICIOUSLY thick and...EXCRUCIATING...(she grins hungrily) Well done. It was quite entertaining to read as Ash squirmed with jealousy...
Though none of the characters seem to have any 'redeeming' qualities about them at this point...I will say that Ash is my LEAST favorite. It's quite a challenge to feel pity for someone who insists on digging a deeper grave for themselves...unless you were their friends before...
*shrugs and smiles* Oh well, I'm rooting for Aiden...(yes, I am indeed one who is decidedly a 'the Phantom should've gotten Christine' girl...hence my siding with Aiden who's dark and desperately passionate:)
So, I suppose we shall see...*smiles and winks*
2His songbird*snickers* This chappie was really cool! The tension was so DELICIOUSLY thick and...EXCRUCIATING...(she grins hungrily) Well done. It was quite entertaining to read as Ash squirmed with jealousy...
Though none of the characters seem to have any 'redeeming' qualities about them at this point...I will say that Ash is my LEAST favorite. It's quite a challenge to feel pity for someone who insists on digging a deeper grave for themselves...unless you were their friends before...
*shrugs and smiles* Oh well, I'm rooting for Aiden...(yes, I am indeed one who is decidedly a 'the Phantom should've gotten Christine' girl...hence my siding with Aiden who's dark and desperately passionate:)
So, I suppose we shall see...*smiles and winks*
4/15/2007 c18 11The Cat Died Nobly
Well, let's start with the fact it's nearly 2 AM and I am exhausted, and probably didn't do the chapter justice when I read it. I swear, at least two times I read back certain parts because I was so delusional. But, I love your story so much, I decided to stay up for it.
Anyway, enough about me, I loved the chapter.
Full of emotion, well written, and I even pictured it, which is good for a writer.
All in all, you've got my attention as a reader. :)
11The Cat Died NoblyWell, let's start with the fact it's nearly 2 AM and I am exhausted, and probably didn't do the chapter justice when I read it. I swear, at least two times I read back certain parts because I was so delusional. But, I love your story so much, I decided to stay up for it.
Anyway, enough about me, I loved the chapter.
Full of emotion, well written, and I even pictured it, which is good for a writer.
All in all, you've got my attention as a reader. :)
4/15/2007 c18 dramaqueen89
drama, drama, drama! i love it :) update soon! aiden really has a lot of issues. poor ash. things were complicated and painful enough as it was. ah well. :D
drama, drama, drama! i love it :) update soon! aiden really has a lot of issues. poor ash. things were complicated and painful enough as it was. ah well. :D
4/15/2007 c18 6givelifeyurall
gezus...what the hell is going on! Tee better not take advantage of Aislyan. and aidan is acting like a jackass, for a good reason, but still, give aislyan a break
6givelifeyurallgezus...what the hell is going on! Tee better not take advantage of Aislyan. and aidan is acting like a jackass, for a good reason, but still, give aislyan a break
4/15/2007 c18 choppa173
No no no! This can't be happening. Tee and Ash that is just wrong. Don't get me wrong i love Tee but he is her friend and just a friend. Bah! a cliffhanger, update soon, please
No no no! This can't be happening. Tee and Ash that is just wrong. Don't get me wrong i love Tee but he is her friend and just a friend. Bah! a cliffhanger, update soon, please
4/15/2007 c18 3Kadekksys
oh, dear. please tell me she stops herself... this is really getting quite frustrating! they love each other, they hate each other, they love each other, they hate each other. So much angst I think my head might explode.
But I really love it. :)
3Kadekksysoh, dear. please tell me she stops herself... this is really getting quite frustrating! they love each other, they hate each other, they love each other, they hate each other. So much angst I think my head might explode.
But I really love it. :)
4/15/2007 c18 5dreamweaver138
aiden needs to get his crap together and tell ash how he feels. okay that sounded kind of mean, but he's gotta tell her before he loses her.
dreamweaver138
5dreamweaver138aiden needs to get his crap together and tell ash how he feels. okay that sounded kind of mean, but he's gotta tell her before he loses her.
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4/15/2007 c18 Calico Dreams
NO NO NO NO NO! You're not allowed to harm Tee! Do you hear me? No harm shall come towards Tee! Gah! Excuse me while I have a tantrum in the corner.
It's the reviews you want isn't it? I mean come on, I know you love them but killing Tee? That's just low. I'm sure I'm not the only one madly in love with that sucker. Therefore, Killing Tee is mean! Plain old mean, low-down, indespicable, abhorrent, insert-disgusting-adjective-here, and-and-and...ingenious. .
Le sigh. I guess I'm left with no other alternative than to review religiously from now on, huh? Hmmph. I'm sure Tee would be dissapointed in you right now. :( Ah well, what can one do.
NO NO NO NO NO! You're not allowed to harm Tee! Do you hear me? No harm shall come towards Tee! Gah! Excuse me while I have a tantrum in the corner.
It's the reviews you want isn't it? I mean come on, I know you love them but killing Tee? That's just low. I'm sure I'm not the only one madly in love with that sucker. Therefore, Killing Tee is mean! Plain old mean, low-down, indespicable, abhorrent, insert-disgusting-adjective-here, and-and-and...ingenious. .
Le sigh. I guess I'm left with no other alternative than to review religiously from now on, huh? Hmmph. I'm sure Tee would be dissapointed in you right now. :( Ah well, what can one do.
4/15/2007 c17 Calico Dreams
I love Paige. Paige. Paige Paige Paige. Love Love Love. Oh and did I mention my undying passion for Tee? Tee. Tee Tee Tee. Love Love Love. Paige and Tee 4ever much?
Ohkay Im done. I just love how you can make your characters so lovable, even the ones who aren't protagonists. I really love the whole suspense with Aiden's past, and am I allowed to hate Dee? Because I do. Just the mere fact that she lives is making me twitch as I type.
Yeah, so can't wait to get started on the next one. I love Te! Tee Tee TEE! Okay sorry had to do it. Keep up the great work ^.~
I love Paige. Paige. Paige Paige Paige. Love Love Love. Oh and did I mention my undying passion for Tee? Tee. Tee Tee Tee. Love Love Love. Paige and Tee 4ever much?
Ohkay Im done. I just love how you can make your characters so lovable, even the ones who aren't protagonists. I really love the whole suspense with Aiden's past, and am I allowed to hate Dee? Because I do. Just the mere fact that she lives is making me twitch as I type.
Yeah, so can't wait to get started on the next one. I love Te! Tee Tee TEE! Okay sorry had to do it. Keep up the great work ^.~
4/15/2007 c18 4Pink Secret
HANNAH MONTANA? What the-? -Gets shot.- Tee is bad. He likes Hannah Montana. xD
Seriously though. This sex scene that seems to be coming up, seems like a good thing that would tell Aiden to truly confess his love to Ash, and tell her what really happened.
And Ash would still love him, Aiden would break up with Dee. (Ugh, I don't like her.) Ash would 'dump' Tee back to Paige, and they get all happy.
Then again, that seems too happy. Another good ending would be Aiden committing suicide...in my opinion. Makes the story more angsty. xD Keep up the good work!
4Pink SecretHANNAH MONTANA? What the-? -Gets shot.- Tee is bad. He likes Hannah Montana. xD
Seriously though. This sex scene that seems to be coming up, seems like a good thing that would tell Aiden to truly confess his love to Ash, and tell her what really happened.
And Ash would still love him, Aiden would break up with Dee. (Ugh, I don't like her.) Ash would 'dump' Tee back to Paige, and they get all happy.
Then again, that seems too happy. Another good ending would be Aiden committing suicide...in my opinion. Makes the story more angsty. xD Keep up the good work!
4/15/2007 c18 20WriterRose
I was so excited to see that you had a new chapter up until I realized I had already read it - lol. Still, really awesome chapter ;D
I'm so sad it's almost over!
20WriterRoseI was so excited to see that you had a new chapter up until I realized I had already read it - lol. Still, really awesome chapter ;D
I'm so sad it's almost over!