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1pluie etourdie
I love it. But can she please dump Paul? Why would she stay with him when she knows she loves Aiden?
1pluie etourdieI love it. But can she please dump Paul? Why would she stay with him when she knows she loves Aiden?
3/25/2007 c7 20WriterRose
Wow this is an awesome story, but when is she going to break up with Paul? Soon I hope. Keep updating.
20WriterRoseWow this is an awesome story, but when is she going to break up with Paul? Soon I hope. Keep updating.
3/25/2007 c7 9TheFallenHeroine
Got to say, i think this story is amazing...Can't wait to see what happens in the end!
Keep writing!
E x
9TheFallenHeroineGot to say, i think this story is amazing...Can't wait to see what happens in the end!
Keep writing!
E x
3/23/2007 c6 1pluie etourdie
It's so sad that they both love one another and yet... both created the perfect situation where that's impossible. I'll be interested to see how this secret past comes out.
Were they using protection, by the way? Or will this lead to something surprising later on?
1pluie etourdieIt's so sad that they both love one another and yet... both created the perfect situation where that's impossible. I'll be interested to see how this secret past comes out.
Were they using protection, by the way? Or will this lead to something surprising later on?
3/23/2007 c6 Jamy98
Oh! The joy, the angst, the hormones, the love! Just don't let her get pregnant. PLEASE?
Oh! The joy, the angst, the hormones, the love! Just don't let her get pregnant. PLEASE?
3/23/2007 c6 Sam
I like the first 6 chapters so far and you posted all six in three days so I had to review. I like Aislynn's character because she's spunky and real. Interesting dilemma you've created for our two man protagonists. And you're cool to know Mazzy Star. The only constructive criticism is grammar, for example, you put the word her instead of him sometimes and you misspelled a few words other than that you got a good plot here. I hope you update soon. Thanks.
I like the first 6 chapters so far and you posted all six in three days so I had to review. I like Aislynn's character because she's spunky and real. Interesting dilemma you've created for our two man protagonists. And you're cool to know Mazzy Star. The only constructive criticism is grammar, for example, you put the word her instead of him sometimes and you misspelled a few words other than that you got a good plot here. I hope you update soon. Thanks.
3/23/2007 c6 4soccerbabe16
gah! i knew the two of them would argue. She should dump paul, even if she doesn't automatically get with aiden i hate thinking of her with paul, he's so horrible! hope more romance comes soon.
awesome story and chapter :)
4soccerbabe16gah! i knew the two of them would argue. She should dump paul, even if she doesn't automatically get with aiden i hate thinking of her with paul, he's so horrible! hope more romance comes soon.
awesome story and chapter :)
3/23/2007 c6 13templeton21
Oh my goodness. Where did you find that picture of Aislynn? She is absolutely gorgeous!
13templeton21Oh my goodness. Where did you find that picture of Aislynn? She is absolutely gorgeous!
3/22/2007 c4 4soccerbabe16
oh! verry interesting... LOL. This is an awesome story and i really hope that you update it again soon. i have to admit i am glad that they got together so quickly, but am surprised she gave up her virginity and all. Meh, what can you do if you're in love, right?
4soccerbabe16oh! verry interesting... LOL. This is an awesome story and i really hope that you update it again soon. i have to admit i am glad that they got together so quickly, but am surprised she gave up her virginity and all. Meh, what can you do if you're in love, right?
3/22/2007 c4 2angeleyez61888
I like how you have set this story up. i can't wait to find out what all happens next seeing how Aiden is just a little drunk...
2angeleyez61888I like how you have set this story up. i can't wait to find out what all happens next seeing how Aiden is just a little drunk...
3/22/2007 c4 1pluie etourdie
Oh man you said things were happening fast - but whoa! Sex so sudden adn soon. Did she even break up with the bad boy yet? Should be interesting to see how this plays after w/ him being drunk at the time and all...
1pluie etourdieOh man you said things were happening fast - but whoa! Sex so sudden adn soon. Did she even break up with the bad boy yet? Should be interesting to see how this plays after w/ him being drunk at the time and all...