for Echo9/27/2008 c12 
1LoveRehab
SO good. I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE this story. Sorry I haven't been reviewing. I feel bad...(i feel a rascal flatts song coming on!)
I feel bad...
Cause I can stand here strong
Cold as stone
Seems so wrong,
I can't explain it.
Whoa. Did NOT mean to start busting out with the rascal flatts. It just happened.
Oh. Let's be best friends.
Whoa. Did NOT mean to say that either.
1LoveRehabSO good. I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE this story. Sorry I haven't been reviewing. I feel bad...(i feel a rascal flatts song coming on!)
I feel bad...
Cause I can stand here strong
Cold as stone
Seems so wrong,
I can't explain it.
Whoa. Did NOT mean to start busting out with the rascal flatts. It just happened.
Oh. Let's be best friends.
Whoa. Did NOT mean to say that either.
9/27/2008 c7 LoveRehab
WHAT UP? I LOVE THIS STORY. haha Okay, I don't know why I said "What up?" and I don't know why I said it in capital letters.
WHAT UP? I LOVE THIS STORY. haha Okay, I don't know why I said "What up?" and I don't know why I said it in capital letters.
9/27/2008 c4 LoveRehab
Sorry I didn't review some of the other chapters. I just really wanted to know what would happen next instead of writing a review. I can't really say I found any errors in this chapter. Once again, I love your lyrics choice.
Sorry I didn't review some of the other chapters. I just really wanted to know what would happen next instead of writing a review. I can't really say I found any errors in this chapter. Once again, I love your lyrics choice.
9/27/2008 c2 LoveRehab
I love the way you wrote this. I truly do. There's a lot of profoundness to the way Aiden and Aislynn interact. I love it. I also positively LOVE the way your music lyrics goes with the story.
I love the way you wrote this. I truly do. There's a lot of profoundness to the way Aiden and Aislynn interact. I love it. I also positively LOVE the way your music lyrics goes with the story.
6/11/2008 c24 brokencrystal7
i loved this story. i cant wait to start reading the sequel.
bye,
Brokencrystal7
i loved this story. i cant wait to start reading the sequel.
bye,
Brokencrystal7
6/11/2008 c9 brokencrystal7
wow that was a really emotional chapter. i almost started crying because they both love each other but they dont think that the other would ever love the other one back. also when aiden called her a bitch... i was so close on crying but i had to remember that this was just a story, well very well writen story.
hope you read me poems and story.
please keep writing,
brokencrystal7 :)
wow that was a really emotional chapter. i almost started crying because they both love each other but they dont think that the other would ever love the other one back. also when aiden called her a bitch... i was so close on crying but i had to remember that this was just a story, well very well writen story.
hope you read me poems and story.
please keep writing,
brokencrystal7 :)
3/24/2008 c25 ShaliaHel
I loved it. There are sentence problems and mechanical errors here and there, but overall I really like the story. I am quite sad Aidan tried to kill himself, and in actuality men usually don't slit their wrists to committ suicide, but very good. I am quite excited to read the sequel.
I loved it. There are sentence problems and mechanical errors here and there, but overall I really like the story. I am quite sad Aidan tried to kill himself, and in actuality men usually don't slit their wrists to committ suicide, but very good. I am quite excited to read the sequel.
3/18/2008 c1 gulistala
Oh dear. He's in love with her? Infatuated with her? And she's not? Poor thing. But ah, I wonder how they'll end up together. Only one way to find out!
gulistanlik
Oh dear. He's in love with her? Infatuated with her? And she's not? Poor thing. But ah, I wonder how they'll end up together. Only one way to find out!
gulistanlik
1/7/2008 c13 boredshitless
i dont understand why he jst doesnt break up wif Dee already and be with Ash, i mean what is he waiting for? i mean he doesnt care about Dee so y not break up wif her so Ash doesnt get jealous in the mean time while he still has to come to Ash
i dont understand why he jst doesnt break up wif Dee already and be with Ash, i mean what is he waiting for? i mean he doesnt care about Dee so y not break up wif her so Ash doesnt get jealous in the mean time while he still has to come to Ash
1/4/2008 c24 3shy green rock
I loved how this story had so much drama!
I read it all in about 3-4hrs, well including an hour break for food. Anyway, I really like it! I'm going to read the sequel and can't wait to know what has happened between them!
3shy green rockI loved how this story had so much drama!
I read it all in about 3-4hrs, well including an hour break for food. Anyway, I really like it! I'm going to read the sequel and can't wait to know what has happened between them!
12/28/2007 c24 EdwardDazzlesMe
Very well written.
The sex is too graphic to keep a T rating though, I think. And the F word was used excessively.
I liked the story, but I wasn't prepared for the material in it that is more than worthy of an M rating.
Maybe you could change it? Just a suggestion. It's your story, after all. ;)
Very well written.
The sex is too graphic to keep a T rating though, I think. And the F word was used excessively.
I liked the story, but I wasn't prepared for the material in it that is more than worthy of an M rating.
Maybe you could change it? Just a suggestion. It's your story, after all. ;)