for Good Enough for Mama2/13/2008 c1 Charity F
This is so sad.
The last line especially gives a last little tug to the heart.
You could make this more powerful by including some more reminisces about the child and her mother.
But well done.
This is so sad.
The last line especially gives a last little tug to the heart.
You could make this more powerful by including some more reminisces about the child and her mother.
But well done.
4/5/2007 c1 
3Kristina Suko
That's really good. So sad. I love the last lines. Amazing powerful stuff. :)
~Maranwe
3Kristina SukoThat's really good. So sad. I love the last lines. Amazing powerful stuff. :)
~Maranwe