
3/23/2007 c1
37TaltushMeiMei
What I like about this is that it's both lovely and has meaning at the same time, which is rare in most "pretty" poems. I like how it's formatted and broken up because it flows well. Good job.

What I like about this is that it's both lovely and has meaning at the same time, which is rare in most "pretty" poems. I like how it's formatted and broken up because it flows well. Good job.