3/23/2007 c1 37TaltushMeiMei
If poems only had to be beautiful, then this would be a great poem. On the other hand, it's not fully real and human-like. It's absolutely lovely, and I really like it, but even just a few more lines involving the "I" would make it so much better. Because it's all nature based, it's bound to be a little less "personal" than other poems, but if it had just an inkling more of a person, it would be amazing. I really do like it a lot, though.