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1/11/2008 c1 31Lurid Black
Wow, really well written, dark, rhymes matched perfectly, great poem, keep writting, so i'll keep reading!

~Lurid~
3/23/2007 c1 Crossing the Rubicon
The topic is a little morbid for my liking, but your rhythm is so perfect. I haven't read something that flowed this well in a long time. I love line 2, by the way.
3/23/2007 c1 59radioactive stanica
This is wonderful. You have such an intresting talent. I love this. I am going to add it to my C2!

Best Wishes!

(TSP)
3/23/2007 c1 37TaltushMeiMei
While a bit creepy, I liked it. Or, at least, everything until the last line with the overusage of the exclaimation point. Up until that point it was great.

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