for Your Burning Love4/4/2007 c1 
112i.am.the.winter
this...is good stuff, to say the least. the rhythm's very clear and the poem isn't repetitive - which is a good thing. some of the rhymes are a bit soft (survive/die, tongue/done) but i barely noticed...i was too lost in the rest of the poem. good work =)
- i.am.the.winter
ps: thanks for the reviews/fave! =)
112i.am.the.winterthis...is good stuff, to say the least. the rhythm's very clear and the poem isn't repetitive - which is a good thing. some of the rhymes are a bit soft (survive/die, tongue/done) but i barely noticed...i was too lost in the rest of the poem. good work =)
- i.am.the.winter
ps: thanks for the reviews/fave! =)
3/24/2007 c1 The Reverse Edge Blade
I liked it. I'm glad that you managed (something I've seen others fail at) to avoid repeating yourself even though the poem had a few verses. It wasn't drabbleish or anything, it was good. You've got a great pen there.
The Reverse Edge Blade
I liked it. I'm glad that you managed (something I've seen others fail at) to avoid repeating yourself even though the poem had a few verses. It wasn't drabbleish or anything, it was good. You've got a great pen there.
The Reverse Edge Blade