for Sad, Sad3/30/2007 c1 polka dots and addictions
nice repetition in the beginning of each verse, the emotion is clear & forceful in this & i love the ending.
nice repetition in the beginning of each verse, the emotion is clear & forceful in this & i love the ending.
3/25/2007 c1 
1Jaeiyola
That is a very beautiful piece. I was in a poetry mood and I am so glad I found your work. Amazing, can't wait to read more.
1JaeiyolaThat is a very beautiful piece. I was in a poetry mood and I am so glad I found your work. Amazing, can't wait to read more.
3/24/2007 c1 x account closed x
beautiful, honestly.
longing, un-required love.
gah.
youve done a great job with this.
beautiful, honestly.
longing, un-required love.
gah.
youve done a great job with this.
3/24/2007 c1 The Reverse Edge Blade
Oh, that was nice! So much feeling and deep words! You described the emotions so well and made it so clear how you feel. Great job!
The Reverse Edge Blade
Oh, that was nice! So much feeling and deep words! You described the emotions so well and made it so clear how you feel. Great job!
The Reverse Edge Blade