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150Ronald Priest Campbell
this was the dumbest writing I have ever came across, no feeling just useless words, you can better than this I think, may not, oh well
150Ronald Priest Campbellthis was the dumbest writing I have ever came across, no feeling just useless words, you can better than this I think, may not, oh well
6/20/2009 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
Rather hypnotic, if I must say so myself.
The first part felt rather whimsical, while the latter half became much more darker and intense. I really enjoyed the piece, I've missed your writing, post more soon.
Much love,
Juliet.
1k+Faithless JulietRather hypnotic, if I must say so myself.
The first part felt rather whimsical, while the latter half became much more darker and intense. I really enjoyed the piece, I've missed your writing, post more soon.
Much love,
Juliet.
4/16/2007 c1 612simpleplan13
I like this a lot... the personification is awesome and the ending was unexpected... Im not 100% sure what you meant by it... I kinda thought maybe the person was crazy and the pills were their meds.. but I could be totally off base... anyhow.. powerful piece and beautifully written
612simpleplan13I like this a lot... the personification is awesome and the ending was unexpected... Im not 100% sure what you meant by it... I kinda thought maybe the person was crazy and the pills were their meds.. but I could be totally off base... anyhow.. powerful piece and beautifully written
4/13/2007 c1 31Holly Rose E
What I get out of this poem is the American stereotype dead-end kinda person. Like, you know they're silently begging for help - giving just the slightest bit of hints that something is wrong, but never speaking about it - and when you finally think of a solution to their unspoken problem, you stuff them with unwanted medicated/therapy and that just increases the problem and they off themselves. or something to that effect.
but i loved loved how the intensity just continues to increase and increase, i especially love how you incorporated swear words in a way that was only for emphasis, and not just for the fun of it.
personally, i loved it. faved.
31Holly Rose EWhat I get out of this poem is the American stereotype dead-end kinda person. Like, you know they're silently begging for help - giving just the slightest bit of hints that something is wrong, but never speaking about it - and when you finally think of a solution to their unspoken problem, you stuff them with unwanted medicated/therapy and that just increases the problem and they off themselves. or something to that effect.
but i loved loved how the intensity just continues to increase and increase, i especially love how you incorporated swear words in a way that was only for emphasis, and not just for the fun of it.
personally, i loved it. faved.
4/2/2007 c1 63lackluster
i'm wondering what you truly meant with this. it's got a sort of child-like quality to it(not childish...just...child...like. hm. i don't know if that makes sense.) and that adds another aspect to it. and then the ending is a different story. i must say, that's my favorite part. i don't know what to make of this poem. it's interesting and it captured my attention, but i'm at a loss when it comes to understanding it.
nonetheless, wonderful imagery, all pure and sorrowful until the end, where it gets dark and subdued.
63lacklusteri'm wondering what you truly meant with this. it's got a sort of child-like quality to it(not childish...just...child...like. hm. i don't know if that makes sense.) and that adds another aspect to it. and then the ending is a different story. i must say, that's my favorite part. i don't know what to make of this poem. it's interesting and it captured my attention, but i'm at a loss when it comes to understanding it.
nonetheless, wonderful imagery, all pure and sorrowful until the end, where it gets dark and subdued.