for In the Mind of a Girl4/14/2007 c1 
19Frames of Insight
Great flow and interesting words placed in unique positions throughout the poem
19Frames of InsightGreat flow and interesting words placed in unique positions throughout the poem
4/1/2007 c1 2Jennifer H. Westall
Wow, this is really good. I get a sense that this girl has been abused. Is that what it is about? It reads beautifully. I love the rhythm.
2Jennifer H. WestallWow, this is really good. I get a sense that this girl has been abused. Is that what it is about? It reads beautifully. I love the rhythm.
3/25/2007 c1 fishslappinghighlandflinger
WOW! I am completely stunned by this poem. This is your best yet I must say. This poem makes me jealous because i wish i could rhyme so flawlessly!Absolutely amazing that I can not conjure up the right words to express my awe.
Mucho heartage,
Stan the Nerd
WOW! I am completely stunned by this poem. This is your best yet I must say. This poem makes me jealous because i wish i could rhyme so flawlessly!Absolutely amazing that I can not conjure up the right words to express my awe.
Mucho heartage,
Stan the Nerd