
6/2/2009 c31
4Kimera77
... So now she will act like a mad woman and throw a rock at the dumb guy car and Erin'll explain she hasn't taken her pills?... and the guy'll hate her and she'll realize she can't be with Jay and ignore him for two years until he ends up with Pele? And nasty guy will make a bet with his friend but end up in love with the crazy-now-with-combed-hair-samora-weirdo? No.. I like Jay too much! ;)
I love this story! It's funny, witty and has an amazing narrative. Congrats on a job well done. Keep it up!

... So now she will act like a mad woman and throw a rock at the dumb guy car and Erin'll explain she hasn't taken her pills?... and the guy'll hate her and she'll realize she can't be with Jay and ignore him for two years until he ends up with Pele? And nasty guy will make a bet with his friend but end up in love with the crazy-now-with-combed-hair-samora-weirdo? No.. I like Jay too much! ;)
I love this story! It's funny, witty and has an amazing narrative. Congrats on a job well done. Keep it up!
5/9/2009 c31
20Twilight Starr
Congratulations on finishing! It was an enjoyable read. The end made me smile and I thought the "Scenes of Passion" fact was amusing. All and all great work.

Congratulations on finishing! It was an enjoyable read. The end made me smile and I thought the "Scenes of Passion" fact was amusing. All and all great work.
5/9/2009 c30 Twilight Starr
The chapter title was fitting. The ending was cute. ^^ Nice work. Will read on. Sorry for taking so long to review.
The chapter title was fitting. The ending was cute. ^^ Nice work. Will read on. Sorry for taking so long to review.
4/24/2009 c5
1Harlee Rae
WRITE MORE OR DIE THATS ALL I CAN SAY! haha irts kinda funny karas like me I'm the school crazy person, i spout random facts like a bad printer and one of my best friends is popular and uses me for damage control...COOL! haha I love this its awesome!

WRITE MORE OR DIE THATS ALL I CAN SAY! haha irts kinda funny karas like me I'm the school crazy person, i spout random facts like a bad printer and one of my best friends is popular and uses me for damage control...COOL! haha I love this its awesome!
4/8/2009 c11 pat-the-tap
i love this story, i can actually laugh when i read it. you should definetly have way more than just 877 reviews. i think you're a good writer so ill stop being lazy and actually say somerthing about your story. all i can say is it keeps me on my toes
i love this story, i can actually laugh when i read it. you should definetly have way more than just 877 reviews. i think you're a good writer so ill stop being lazy and actually say somerthing about your story. all i can say is it keeps me on my toes
3/22/2009 c31
1PerfectDisaster196
I LOVED this story! I'm officially addicted to it, having read it nonstop. (:

I LOVED this story! I'm officially addicted to it, having read it nonstop. (:
3/9/2009 c1 clunkishu
this is my favourite fictionpress story so far! I LOVE KARA! lol i just started at auckland uni this year...gotta love the trips to albert park :D
this is my favourite fictionpress story so far! I LOVE KARA! lol i just started at auckland uni this year...gotta love the trips to albert park :D
2/28/2009 c26 GEN
HIhi! Just wanted to tell you that this is one of my most favourite stories! You did an awesome job. Keep writing :)
HIhi! Just wanted to tell you that this is one of my most favourite stories! You did an awesome job. Keep writing :)