
10/28/2012 c31
2loveofallthatisawesome
This is one of the most amazing stories I've ever read. I first glanced at it back in like April, but I put it off because Kara is such a...different character, and I wasn't sure I would like her. But then, I read the one-shot about Kara and Jay and I loved them, so I decided to read the story and I love it :D
Kara is just a funny person. The way she's always stating a bunch of facts, her eccentricity, her family, the way she is with her friends, and just her personality in general is so different from anything I've ever read that I love her more for for it.
Jay is a cool guy. You could actually feel him transforming with each chapter that went on and I loved his interludes. His voice was so different from Kara's and I really liked that. I also loved his personality. At times I thought he was a bit harsh to Kara, but it all paid off at the end.
I don't know what else to say except that this is definitely one of my top ten favorite stories on here :D

This is one of the most amazing stories I've ever read. I first glanced at it back in like April, but I put it off because Kara is such a...different character, and I wasn't sure I would like her. But then, I read the one-shot about Kara and Jay and I loved them, so I decided to read the story and I love it :D
Kara is just a funny person. The way she's always stating a bunch of facts, her eccentricity, her family, the way she is with her friends, and just her personality in general is so different from anything I've ever read that I love her more for for it.
Jay is a cool guy. You could actually feel him transforming with each chapter that went on and I loved his interludes. His voice was so different from Kara's and I really liked that. I also loved his personality. At times I thought he was a bit harsh to Kara, but it all paid off at the end.
I don't know what else to say except that this is definitely one of my top ten favorite stories on here :D
10/27/2012 c31 daresa09
Seki a lo story li gaaaams . lol . You can't even imagine my glee when I started reading this ! Fucking love when I read awesome stories from a Samoan author . Kara is priceless . That poly girl rage is golden . Although I found her tendency to spout random info a little annoying . But maybe that's because I'm too lazy to try to understand what she says . God , I wish this was published , if buy the book and send it to my sister .
Opinion of the characters ...
Jay- he's an ass . But I'm glad Kara put him in his place . Though the rate their relationship was going , and everything in his perspective , I was seriously doubting that he and Kara would get together in the end .
Deacon- I fucking LOVE Deacon ! Just how affectionate and carefree he is . It's refreshing when you read of a male character who isn't all broody and moody and an irate assface . He gets mad once in a blue moon , but aside from his whore tendencies , he's all smooth sailing . However , I think he too had a crush on Kara . I mean , who just kisses their best friend for no reason ? Plus all his drunken sexual escapades seem like he's trying to cover up for it . idk . Just an opinion .
Jesse- I like her . Don't really have anything else to add . lol .
Burr- he's a fucking ninja . He's great .
Will- he annoys me for some reason . He reminds me of Derek from Sione's Wedding , except not as funny .
Mum- I LOVE YOU .
That's the only ones I care about . teehee .
Kara is my favorite . Always will be .
And you are the bomb diggity :)
Seki a lo story li gaaaams . lol . You can't even imagine my glee when I started reading this ! Fucking love when I read awesome stories from a Samoan author . Kara is priceless . That poly girl rage is golden . Although I found her tendency to spout random info a little annoying . But maybe that's because I'm too lazy to try to understand what she says . God , I wish this was published , if buy the book and send it to my sister .
Opinion of the characters ...
Jay- he's an ass . But I'm glad Kara put him in his place . Though the rate their relationship was going , and everything in his perspective , I was seriously doubting that he and Kara would get together in the end .
Deacon- I fucking LOVE Deacon ! Just how affectionate and carefree he is . It's refreshing when you read of a male character who isn't all broody and moody and an irate assface . He gets mad once in a blue moon , but aside from his whore tendencies , he's all smooth sailing . However , I think he too had a crush on Kara . I mean , who just kisses their best friend for no reason ? Plus all his drunken sexual escapades seem like he's trying to cover up for it . idk . Just an opinion .
Jesse- I like her . Don't really have anything else to add . lol .
Burr- he's a fucking ninja . He's great .
Will- he annoys me for some reason . He reminds me of Derek from Sione's Wedding , except not as funny .
Mum- I LOVE YOU .
That's the only ones I care about . teehee .
Kara is my favorite . Always will be .
And you are the bomb diggity :)
10/25/2012 c4 Guest
Jacob Edwards!? xD. So ironic :P.
Jacob Edwards!? xD. So ironic :P.
10/23/2012 c10
8E.L.J.J.J
Even if this is a finished book already, I love it. XD I'm getting ready to read chapter 11 now. I really like the character display, if you know what I mean. I kind of fell in love with Will, I only think he got drunk and blah blah blah because he was confused and hurt and didn't know what to do about Kara and needed other people to get over the fact that Kara didn't like him. I like Burr too because I think he's funny. Twinkie? XD As for Jay, I LOVE THE NAME! I think it's smexshy. Although, it still doesn't change my views about the character. Personally, (since I'm the weird person I am and while reading stories imagine the guy in my head, just don't ask), I think he's a jerk. But I love how he's kind of as smart as Kara is, at least from what I've read, he might be nice too, IDK, I haven't read the whole thing. I ALSO love how you do the fact thing, adds to the funny parts. I'm kind of like that too really but that is a whole different story. Anyways, sorry for my long opinion, but if you're still checking these reviews, I have a story close to this, I want someone to review cuz I think the thing is awesome, so I'll post the thing here: s/3065391/1/One-Word
Sorry yet again, Mwah, E.L.J.J.J (P.S, adding to faves!)

Even if this is a finished book already, I love it. XD I'm getting ready to read chapter 11 now. I really like the character display, if you know what I mean. I kind of fell in love with Will, I only think he got drunk and blah blah blah because he was confused and hurt and didn't know what to do about Kara and needed other people to get over the fact that Kara didn't like him. I like Burr too because I think he's funny. Twinkie? XD As for Jay, I LOVE THE NAME! I think it's smexshy. Although, it still doesn't change my views about the character. Personally, (since I'm the weird person I am and while reading stories imagine the guy in my head, just don't ask), I think he's a jerk. But I love how he's kind of as smart as Kara is, at least from what I've read, he might be nice too, IDK, I haven't read the whole thing. I ALSO love how you do the fact thing, adds to the funny parts. I'm kind of like that too really but that is a whole different story. Anyways, sorry for my long opinion, but if you're still checking these reviews, I have a story close to this, I want someone to review cuz I think the thing is awesome, so I'll post the thing here: s/3065391/1/One-Word
Sorry yet again, Mwah, E.L.J.J.J (P.S, adding to faves!)
9/7/2012 c31 Reena
Loved it..the humour,Kara's wackiness,jay's frustration,their stuck up attitude and pride all of it was so refreshing so full of up to the author for producing such entertaining peice of work:)
Loved it..the humour,Kara's wackiness,jay's frustration,their stuck up attitude and pride all of it was so refreshing so full of up to the author for producing such entertaining peice of work:)
8/27/2012 c7 It's too Dark to Read
Did you know that sometime in the past century people used to call University "Versity" for short, now we call it "Uni" it's quite cool how the language slang changes :)
Did you know that sometime in the past century people used to call University "Versity" for short, now we call it "Uni" it's quite cool how the language slang changes :)
8/27/2012 c5 It's too Dark to Read
I have a grudge against Australians... HOW COULD THEY TAKE THE PAVLOVA AWAY! :'(
I have a grudge against Australians... HOW COULD THEY TAKE THE PAVLOVA AWAY! :'(
8/27/2012 c3 It's too Dark to Read
YAY! It's kind off weird that I get realy excited whenever someone mentions NZ or anything about us isn't it... I think it's cause literally NO ONE in the rest of the world knows that we exist... Did you know, someone I talked to thought that New Zealand was connected to Australia by the Sydney Harbour bridge... I lost a few braincells from face-palming that day...
YAY! It's kind off weird that I get realy excited whenever someone mentions NZ or anything about us isn't it... I think it's cause literally NO ONE in the rest of the world knows that we exist... Did you know, someone I talked to thought that New Zealand was connected to Australia by the Sydney Harbour bridge... I lost a few braincells from face-palming that day...
8/26/2012 c1 It's too Dark to Read
EPIC! GO FREAKING NEW ZEALAND! Anyway, great chapter, it had me suppressing laughter (and failing) in English, and yes, this chapter made me get some seriously weird looks from my classmates ;)
EPIC! GO FREAKING NEW ZEALAND! Anyway, great chapter, it had me suppressing laughter (and failing) in English, and yes, this chapter made me get some seriously weird looks from my classmates ;)
8/26/2012 c31 DA-chen1
Great great great! :-)
Funny and honest... believable that they are good together! ;-)
Mira
Great great great! :-)
Funny and honest... believable that they are good together! ;-)
Mira