for I'm Going to Kill Someone12/7/2008 c1 
13blurrylights
How random. I think the thing with the mother was unnecessary, but I liked it. You did a good job. :)
13blurrylightsHow random. I think the thing with the mother was unnecessary, but I liked it. You did a good job. :)
9/1/2008 c1 criti-sized
I love the chaos in this short. Speaking from experience where I work in retail, I know just how bad it can get, lol. I feel sorry for Rae, who has a lot to cope with, along with living in a town where picking in ones nose would be nose, lol.
A few minor grammatical mistakes, but we wouldn't be authors if we wrote perfectly, right?
Great short.
C.S.
I love the chaos in this short. Speaking from experience where I work in retail, I know just how bad it can get, lol. I feel sorry for Rae, who has a lot to cope with, along with living in a town where picking in ones nose would be nose, lol.
A few minor grammatical mistakes, but we wouldn't be authors if we wrote perfectly, right?
Great short.
C.S.