for My Hero, My Destroyer10/12/2010 c1 
32Who Is This Girl Anyway
This is pretty good. The anger is apparent in the speaker's words.
32Who Is This Girl AnywayThis is pretty good. The anger is apparent in the speaker's words.
9/1/2008 c1 criti-sized
Wow, a very nice story with a cruel honest touch to it. I like the thoughts of the narrator in this short. And the fact that not much is revealed about the family except what is important is nicer.
C.S.
Wow, a very nice story with a cruel honest touch to it. I like the thoughts of the narrator in this short. And the fact that not much is revealed about the family except what is important is nicer.
C.S.
6/17/2008 c1 Unsociably Acceptable
oh my gosh, that was so sad! :'(
men. such disappointments. so depressing. so disgusting.
oh my gosh, that was so sad! :'(
men. such disappointments. so depressing. so disgusting.
3/27/2007 c1 TheGrandCookieCaper
powerful, and emotional.
Very nice.
powerful, and emotional.
Very nice.