for Seraph3/14/2010 c3 
1xXliarliarXx
Great story so far! :)
Check out my supernatural/romance story When The Sun Goes Down.
1xXliarliarXxGreat story so far! :)
Check out my supernatural/romance story When The Sun Goes Down.
7/30/2009 c3 8aurora borealis
Interesting story. I like the universe.
Question: Why on earth did she have to go to the future *right now*, when she has over 130 years to train and get better?
You write well. I can't wait to read more. :)
8aurora borealisInteresting story. I like the universe.
Question: Why on earth did she have to go to the future *right now*, when she has over 130 years to train and get better?
You write well. I can't wait to read more. :)
6/17/2009 c2 Mayuka
This is really good. Interesting story. Please update soon! You got me hooked already! :D
This is really good. Interesting story. Please update soon! You got me hooked already! :D
2/29/2008 c2 25V de V
Ah, interesting? You see, I am not a huge, huge fan of fantasy. It may take me a while to get into your story, but I am sure you have some master plot all figured out.
Unusual to have a half-demon, half-angel child. If there was not anything more lined up, I would just write a story around that concept.
Bending time? Oh, this will toy with my physics nicely. Haha.
Sad about Nathan. And three centuries later?
Well, please write more. There are a lot of unanswered questions. And thank you for your review.
25V de VAh, interesting? You see, I am not a huge, huge fan of fantasy. It may take me a while to get into your story, but I am sure you have some master plot all figured out.
Unusual to have a half-demon, half-angel child. If there was not anything more lined up, I would just write a story around that concept.
Bending time? Oh, this will toy with my physics nicely. Haha.
Sad about Nathan. And three centuries later?
Well, please write more. There are a lot of unanswered questions. And thank you for your review.
5/29/2007 c2 6Carmel March
This chapter gave me a warm, fuzzy feeling. I loved it :) You've got strong, realistic, and likable characters. Excellent dialogue. A sufficient amount of description. You've also got that whole supernatural aspect going for you. Good job on this, and I can't wait for more!
~carm~
6Carmel MarchThis chapter gave me a warm, fuzzy feeling. I loved it :) You've got strong, realistic, and likable characters. Excellent dialogue. A sufficient amount of description. You've also got that whole supernatural aspect going for you. Good job on this, and I can't wait for more!
~carm~
5/5/2007 c1 Carmel March
An excellent start to the story :) I love the storyline and the idea of it all, and your writing is wonderful. Hope to see more soon!
~carm~
An excellent start to the story :) I love the storyline and the idea of it all, and your writing is wonderful. Hope to see more soon!
~carm~
4/1/2007 c1 6Shadowed and Shattered
I love this story, even though I've said that before. I review even if I've read it. I haven't read the next chapter yet, as I had to get off the computer. I'm going to read it soon, and then I'll send it back to you.
Still love this story. I enjoy repeating myself. Hm... I should work on that.
6Shadowed and ShatteredI love this story, even though I've said that before. I review even if I've read it. I haven't read the next chapter yet, as I had to get off the computer. I'm going to read it soon, and then I'll send it back to you.
Still love this story. I enjoy repeating myself. Hm... I should work on that.