
5/22/2007 c11
9Stahlut
that was awesome, it is really nice that she is now getting along with harrison it is really cute, and well its kind of touching them being friends and in general I just absolutely loved it.

that was awesome, it is really nice that she is now getting along with harrison it is really cute, and well its kind of touching them being friends and in general I just absolutely loved it.
5/21/2007 c11 OoohLookACat
aww they're finally friends!
and poor kennedy
(pete's bday)
that's gotta suck
it being tradition and all
=(
good chapter though
loved it
can't wait for more
izzie
aww they're finally friends!
and poor kennedy
(pete's bday)
that's gotta suck
it being tradition and all
=(
good chapter though
loved it
can't wait for more
izzie
5/21/2007 c11
3otter pop
*smiles like a maniac* FINALLY! I think I love Harrison. But I think I want to call him Chase. I like that name.
Okay, well this chapter made me happy. =] So update soon!

*smiles like a maniac* FINALLY! I think I love Harrison. But I think I want to call him Chase. I like that name.
Okay, well this chapter made me happy. =] So update soon!
5/20/2007 c10 citygrl
that was sad, but then again, it wasn't. and i still don't know who i think kennedy should date. i like spencer but i feel like it's going to be harrison and jake is an interesting addition. can't wait for more!
that was sad, but then again, it wasn't. and i still don't know who i think kennedy should date. i like spencer but i feel like it's going to be harrison and jake is an interesting addition. can't wait for more!
5/16/2007 c10
3oh.look.a.bird.CHOCOLATE
WOW
only day one and their already fighting
good chapter
i like jake (he's hot and nice^^)
cant wait'till next chapter

WOW
only day one and their already fighting
good chapter
i like jake (he's hot and nice^^)
cant wait'till next chapter
5/15/2007 c8
5Mass Genocide
I forgot that I only review on even numbered chapters and so I went onto the next chapter without this. Well, I like it so far except the drama at the end but I don't think that Kennedy should hook up with that asshole, but I'll wait it gets better.
Mass Genocide

I forgot that I only review on even numbered chapters and so I went onto the next chapter without this. Well, I like it so far except the drama at the end but I don't think that Kennedy should hook up with that asshole, but I'll wait it gets better.
Mass Genocide
5/14/2007 c10 OoohLookACat
ooh
major turning point
YAY!
can't wait
and mwhahahahaha
take that harrison
FEEL GUILTY!
hahahaha
stupid idiot.
and i love spencer.
he's so awesome
same with jake, who as a new character
is quite awesome!
=)
izzie
ooh
major turning point
YAY!
can't wait
and mwhahahahaha
take that harrison
FEEL GUILTY!
hahahaha
stupid idiot.
and i love spencer.
he's so awesome
same with jake, who as a new character
is quite awesome!
=)
izzie
5/14/2007 c10
3Allison Smith
cheers to that, Finals do suck. I just finished mine last week, so good luck with yours.
this is... interesting. I really mean that, but I'd like to get more information on her. And when is there going to be some real action between her and Harrison? because there's so much tension there I could just scream.

cheers to that, Finals do suck. I just finished mine last week, so good luck with yours.
this is... interesting. I really mean that, but I'd like to get more information on her. And when is there going to be some real action between her and Harrison? because there's so much tension there I could just scream.
5/14/2007 c10
9Stahlut
oh it just gets better, this story has made my day and it just hapens to be my birthday! yay go me presents, sorry, So yeah really good.

oh it just gets better, this story has made my day and it just hapens to be my birthday! yay go me presents, sorry, So yeah really good.
5/14/2007 c6
5Mass Genocide
I'd like to review but can't. There's not enough time. Must finish before 6:30 p.m.

I'd like to review but can't. There's not enough time. Must finish before 6:30 p.m.
5/14/2007 c4 Mass Genocide
This story is really looking to a lot of potential, since you're of age, you might as well look to a publisher once you get it finished. Well, I'm off to read chapters 5 & 6. I only review on even numbered chapters.
Mass Genocide
This story is really looking to a lot of potential, since you're of age, you might as well look to a publisher once you get it finished. Well, I'm off to read chapters 5 & 6. I only review on even numbered chapters.
Mass Genocide
5/14/2007 c2 Mass Genocide
hey, i really like your story so far and I hope to keep reading it, however, like you said, it is cliche and you might want to bump up on the details a little. Also, I'd like to point out that you add things in right when they come up and maybe you should add them in beforehand? For instance, when I learned about the diner, et cetera. But that's all that I can criticize for now, so I'm off to the next chapter.
Mass Genocide
hey, i really like your story so far and I hope to keep reading it, however, like you said, it is cliche and you might want to bump up on the details a little. Also, I'd like to point out that you add things in right when they come up and maybe you should add them in beforehand? For instance, when I learned about the diner, et cetera. But that's all that I can criticize for now, so I'm off to the next chapter.
Mass Genocide
5/14/2007 c10
3otter pop
Aw man. Poor Kennedy... I wonder what happened to her... Well, you should tell us. Soon. Like, in the next chapter or so. I think I like Harrison, even though he's a meanie.
And, I would say that I loved this chapter, and this story. But I'm sure you already know that by now.. So yeah. Update soon!

Aw man. Poor Kennedy... I wonder what happened to her... Well, you should tell us. Soon. Like, in the next chapter or so. I think I like Harrison, even though he's a meanie.
And, I would say that I loved this chapter, and this story. But I'm sure you already know that by now.. So yeah. Update soon!