for Running away7/19/2010 c12 RandomReviewer
sorry, but i dont like this new progression with kennedy and harrison. i always thought it would be nice if they gradually became friends, and then mabey something more. i dont know, this new development just ruins the whole love/hate realationship that they have.
sorry, but i dont like this new progression with kennedy and harrison. i always thought it would be nice if they gradually became friends, and then mabey something more. i dont know, this new development just ruins the whole love/hate realationship that they have.
4/17/2010 c18 omnomnomnom
this chapter was written beautifully, i actually had tears in my eyes when ken and nathan were saying their goodbyes, it was really touching! anyway i'm going keep reading!
this chapter was written beautifully, i actually had tears in my eyes when ken and nathan were saying their goodbyes, it was really touching! anyway i'm going keep reading!
4/10/2010 c25 melodic-maggie
This is a beautiful story and it is very well written. Thanks for writing it =)
This is a beautiful story and it is very well written. Thanks for writing it =)
2/15/2010 c25 MarieAnn
This was an amazing story. I thought it was brilliantly written. I really hope you consider doing a sequel either on Chase and Kennedy or even Nathan and his life or perhaps on Spencer and Emma. I would love to read that. :-)
This was an amazing story. I thought it was brilliantly written. I really hope you consider doing a sequel either on Chase and Kennedy or even Nathan and his life or perhaps on Spencer and Emma. I would love to read that. :-)
10/1/2009 c25 abbsi
Great story about learning to live and love again after tragedy. It really showcases my favorite thing about the romance genre, which is a chance to really get into the characters, to see depths of their personalities and relationship, and to watch how the personalities play off of each other. Sorry I don't have anything more meaningful to put here, but good story.
Great story about learning to live and love again after tragedy. It really showcases my favorite thing about the romance genre, which is a chance to really get into the characters, to see depths of their personalities and relationship, and to watch how the personalities play off of each other. Sorry I don't have anything more meaningful to put here, but good story.
10/1/2009 c18 abbsi
*pout* I cried. Great character depth and way to live up to backstory hype. lol. (don't you hate reading for 10 chapters about how terrible something was and it turns out a cat died or something else really dumb?)
*pout* I cried. Great character depth and way to live up to backstory hype. lol. (don't you hate reading for 10 chapters about how terrible something was and it turns out a cat died or something else really dumb?)
9/29/2009 c2 Dwindling Fire
i like this, but the changes from scene to scene confuse me. other than that, its all good xD
i like this, but the changes from scene to scene confuse me. other than that, its all good xD
9/12/2009 c25 
4SilverChelle14
Wow. I'm speechless. I have no idea what to say. Last night, I read all the way through Chapter 24 before I had to go to bed, and I just finished the epilogue this morning. I'm so impressed. I can't believe that I did read 24 chapters in a row, but I just couldn't stop because I loved your story so much! I want to give you all kinds of compliments, but I don't even know where to start.
I guess I'll say I was most impressed by the way each of your characters had a distinct personality. I could feel them there while I was reading. I loved them each in their own way, and I've always wanted boy friends like that.
Also, your plot came full-circle. It was nice, and it's not like you really lost focus ever. The variety of these chapters made the story even more interesting.
And when the story did end, I wasn't left hanging. I felt like, 'Hey, this is definitely the ending.' Closure was present. The ending put me at peace with the story.
You're a great writer, and I want to say thank you for sharing such an alluring story.
Good luck!
-GH*
4SilverChelle14Wow. I'm speechless. I have no idea what to say. Last night, I read all the way through Chapter 24 before I had to go to bed, and I just finished the epilogue this morning. I'm so impressed. I can't believe that I did read 24 chapters in a row, but I just couldn't stop because I loved your story so much! I want to give you all kinds of compliments, but I don't even know where to start.
I guess I'll say I was most impressed by the way each of your characters had a distinct personality. I could feel them there while I was reading. I loved them each in their own way, and I've always wanted boy friends like that.
Also, your plot came full-circle. It was nice, and it's not like you really lost focus ever. The variety of these chapters made the story even more interesting.
And when the story did end, I wasn't left hanging. I felt like, 'Hey, this is definitely the ending.' Closure was present. The ending put me at peace with the story.
You're a great writer, and I want to say thank you for sharing such an alluring story.
Good luck!
-GH*
7/16/2009 c25 Downtown Detours
Holy hell.
I know this is a relatively old story but I still really enjoyed it.
Sure is a tear jerker though. I don't think I've ever cried that much reading a story on FP.
What makes this story so good is that it didn't have petty high school drama like most stories set in a high school do. Sure she hated the guys at first but they came to like each other pretty fast.
Harrison was really awesome too.
Ugh; really glad I found and read this story.
Holy hell.
I know this is a relatively old story but I still really enjoyed it.
Sure is a tear jerker though. I don't think I've ever cried that much reading a story on FP.
What makes this story so good is that it didn't have petty high school drama like most stories set in a high school do. Sure she hated the guys at first but they came to like each other pretty fast.
Harrison was really awesome too.
Ugh; really glad I found and read this story.
7/2/2009 c25 samora
i really like this story i love max hes jsut so different and sunny and i cant wait for the sequel.
i really like this story i love max hes jsut so different and sunny and i cant wait for the sequel.
6/21/2009 c25 7plumbucket
That was really quite poignant. I was thrown off a bit by the first chapter, but I'm glad I decided to stick with it. You really did an amazing job.
Thanks for the experience,
Push
7plumbucketThat was really quite poignant. I was thrown off a bit by the first chapter, but I'm glad I decided to stick with it. You really did an amazing job.
Thanks for the experience,
Push
6/12/2009 c1 Meee
OMG! This is one of the best things I've ever read! In one sitting!
Thanks for sharing it with all of us. I can't even suggest anything; it was flawless!
OMG! This is one of the best things I've ever read! In one sitting!
Thanks for sharing it with all of us. I can't even suggest anything; it was flawless!
6/3/2009 c25 C
This is such a beautiful story. It's funny yet it brings out emotions that you never thought you could get from a story. Emotions such as grief and longing, feelings that make us realize that it is never easy to lose someone and just let go. This story shows the meaning of true love, happiness and friendship. I'm glad you finished it, great job!
This is such a beautiful story. It's funny yet it brings out emotions that you never thought you could get from a story. Emotions such as grief and longing, feelings that make us realize that it is never easy to lose someone and just let go. This story shows the meaning of true love, happiness and friendship. I'm glad you finished it, great job!