for Running away4/29/2007 c5 
7Sunne
Loved it! Max and Dylan are great. I love how they react to Kennedy's remarks...especially Dylan. Yeah, hot nerds are my thing too. There's nothing like a brain beneath the good looks. I think the story is progressing very well, and you really don't have anything to worry about. I do understand about being insecure over a story. I'm the same way with nearly everything I write. Outlines do help though, I've found. Even very general and loose outlines can help with directing the plot. That's my little two cents of advice, I suppose.
-Sunne
7SunneLoved it! Max and Dylan are great. I love how they react to Kennedy's remarks...especially Dylan. Yeah, hot nerds are my thing too. There's nothing like a brain beneath the good looks. I think the story is progressing very well, and you really don't have anything to worry about. I do understand about being insecure over a story. I'm the same way with nearly everything I write. Outlines do help though, I've found. Even very general and loose outlines can help with directing the plot. That's my little two cents of advice, I suppose.
-Sunne
4/25/2007 c5 3phelps112
I liked it so far. It flows well. Who is Peter? Or did I just miss something?
3phelps112I liked it so far. It flows well. Who is Peter? Or did I just miss something?
4/25/2007 c5 9Stahlut
I like it still and it is good to learn more about the other guys. I really would like to learn more about Kennedy because I feel like she has all these secrets that I just want to know.
9StahlutI like it still and it is good to learn more about the other guys. I really would like to learn more about Kennedy because I feel like she has all these secrets that I just want to know.
4/24/2007 c5 3oh.look.a.bird.CHOCOLATE
this is soo good
i didnt comment on the other chapters because i was too excited to read the next but this really good
i know you updated today so i dont expect and update until 1-2 weeks
too little? too long?
only because some stories i have been readinf on other websites have taken about this long to update and blah blah blah
i type too much
anyway very good story
3oh.look.a.bird.CHOCOLATEthis is soo good
i didnt comment on the other chapters because i was too excited to read the next but this really good
i know you updated today so i dont expect and update until 1-2 weeks
too little? too long?
only because some stories i have been readinf on other websites have taken about this long to update and blah blah blah
i type too much
anyway very good story
4/24/2007 c5 82Doxology
Oh, I like Dylan the best so far. I think the story is moving along just fine. Great, in fact. Update as soon as you get the chance.
Peace and Love
~ Lifted
82DoxologyOh, I like Dylan the best so far. I think the story is moving along just fine. Great, in fact. Update as soon as you get the chance.
Peace and Love
~ Lifted
4/24/2007 c5 3otter pop
So... I'm curious as to how Kennedy's going to react to Harrison.
But...PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
3otter popSo... I'm curious as to how Kennedy's going to react to Harrison.
But...PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
4/17/2007 c4 82Doxology
Kennedy seemed a bit too easy this chapter. Like, I felt like she gave in and became Spencer's friends too easily. But as I read on, and you kind of explained her reasoning and thoughts, I guess it started to make more sense. Great job and update soon!
Peace and Love
~ Lifted
82DoxologyKennedy seemed a bit too easy this chapter. Like, I felt like she gave in and became Spencer's friends too easily. But as I read on, and you kind of explained her reasoning and thoughts, I guess it started to make more sense. Great job and update soon!
Peace and Love
~ Lifted
4/17/2007 c4 7Sunne
I really, really love this. I like how you keep things real with Spencer...you show that he has feelings and that he's a human being. He reacts to Kennedy in realistic ways. Kennedy...oh man I really love her character. I like how she's opening up to Spencer and I can't wait for her to formally meet Harrison, Max, and Dylan. This is also really well written. It's easy to read but has enough detail to paint a good picture of what's going on. Love it!
-Sunne
7SunneI really, really love this. I like how you keep things real with Spencer...you show that he has feelings and that he's a human being. He reacts to Kennedy in realistic ways. Kennedy...oh man I really love her character. I like how she's opening up to Spencer and I can't wait for her to formally meet Harrison, Max, and Dylan. This is also really well written. It's easy to read but has enough detail to paint a good picture of what's going on. Love it!
-Sunne
4/17/2007 c4 9Stahlut
oh I like how she is finally letting someone in and I can't wait to know more. keep up the great writing.
9Stahlutoh I like how she is finally letting someone in and I can't wait to know more. keep up the great writing.
4/12/2007 c3 82Doxology
Damn, I really like this! I didn't find the third chapter unrealistic at all, and I think you're doing a great job handling the characters. Now, I have no idea where this story's gonna go, but I hope you update soon! I just love this so far.
Peace and Love
~ Lifted
82DoxologyDamn, I really like this! I didn't find the third chapter unrealistic at all, and I think you're doing a great job handling the characters. Now, I have no idea where this story's gonna go, but I hope you update soon! I just love this so far.
Peace and Love
~ Lifted
4/12/2007 c3 3otter pop
I love this story. It's so different than anything I've read. Very original. And I LOVE Spencer, he's such a sweetie! Ok, well, update soon!
3otter popI love this story. It's so different than anything I've read. Very original. And I LOVE Spencer, he's such a sweetie! Ok, well, update soon!
4/12/2007 c3 4soccerbabe16
wow! i just found this story and it is so good! definitely one of my faves, and you only have a couple chapters so far! I promise to review for every chapter you publish, and please don't quit this story like some people do :( it is just so amazing! update really really soon because i can't wait to know what happens, does kennedy get with harrison in the end? or with one of the other guys? or with nobody? i really wanna know!
4soccerbabe16wow! i just found this story and it is so good! definitely one of my faves, and you only have a couple chapters so far! I promise to review for every chapter you publish, and please don't quit this story like some people do :( it is just so amazing! update really really soon because i can't wait to know what happens, does kennedy get with harrison in the end? or with one of the other guys? or with nobody? i really wanna know!
4/12/2007 c3 Kelly Melly
i get what you're saying about this chapter but its still ok. i like the story so update soon please! Laters
~Kelly Melly
i get what you're saying about this chapter but its still ok. i like the story so update soon please! Laters
~Kelly Melly