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4/29/2007 c5 7Sunne
Loved it! Max and Dylan are great. I love how they react to Kennedy's remarks...especially Dylan. Yeah, hot nerds are my thing too. There's nothing like a brain beneath the good looks. I think the story is progressing very well, and you really don't have anything to worry about. I do understand about being insecure over a story. I'm the same way with nearly everything I write. Outlines do help though, I've found. Even very general and loose outlines can help with directing the plot. That's my little two cents of advice, I suppose.

4/25/2007 c5 3phelps112
I liked it so far. It flows well. Who is Peter? Or did I just miss something?
4/25/2007 c5 9Stahlut
I like it still and it is good to learn more about the other guys. I really would like to learn more about Kennedy because I feel like she has all these secrets that I just want to know.
4/24/2007 c5 3oh.look.a.bird.CHOCOLATE
this is soo good

i didnt comment on the other chapters because i was too excited to read the next but this really good

i know you updated today so i dont expect and update until 1-2 weeks

too little? too long?

only because some stories i have been readinf on other websites have taken about this long to update and blah blah blah

i type too much

anyway very good story
4/24/2007 c5 82Doxology
Oh, I like Dylan the best so far. I think the story is moving along just fine. Great, in fact. Update as soon as you get the chance.

Peace and Love

~ Lifted
4/24/2007 c5 5Holiday in Spain
awesome. ^^
4/24/2007 c5 3otter pop
So... I'm curious as to how Kennedy's going to react to Harrison.

4/18/2007 c4 Kelly Melly
Hey liked the chapter! Update soon, Laters

~Kelly Melly
4/17/2007 c4 82Doxology
Kennedy seemed a bit too easy this chapter. Like, I felt like she gave in and became Spencer's friends too easily. But as I read on, and you kind of explained her reasoning and thoughts, I guess it started to make more sense. Great job and update soon!

Peace and Love

~ Lifted
4/17/2007 c4 7Sunne
I really, really love this. I like how you keep things real with Spencer...you show that he has feelings and that he's a human being. He reacts to Kennedy in realistic ways. Kennedy...oh man I really love her character. I like how she's opening up to Spencer and I can't wait for her to formally meet Harrison, Max, and Dylan. This is also really well written. It's easy to read but has enough detail to paint a good picture of what's going on. Love it!

4/17/2007 c4 9Stahlut
oh I like how she is finally letting someone in and I can't wait to know more. keep up the great writing.
4/12/2007 c3 82Doxology
Damn, I really like this! I didn't find the third chapter unrealistic at all, and I think you're doing a great job handling the characters. Now, I have no idea where this story's gonna go, but I hope you update soon! I just love this so far.

Peace and Love

~ Lifted
4/12/2007 c3 3otter pop
I love this story. It's so different than anything I've read. Very original. And I LOVE Spencer, he's such a sweetie! Ok, well, update soon!
4/12/2007 c3 4soccerbabe16
wow! i just found this story and it is so good! definitely one of my faves, and you only have a couple chapters so far! I promise to review for every chapter you publish, and please don't quit this story like some people do :( it is just so amazing! update really really soon because i can't wait to know what happens, does kennedy get with harrison in the end? or with one of the other guys? or with nobody? i really wanna know!
4/12/2007 c3 Kelly Melly
i get what you're saying about this chapter but its still ok. i like the story so update soon please! Laters

~Kelly Melly
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