for Running away8/11/2008 c25 reader
Aw, that was incredibly sweet. I loved this ending. :) I'd probably comment more if it were some other time but it's four in the morning, and I'm exhausted. But me staying up to four is a testament to the fantastic-ness that is your story. ^_^
Aw, that was incredibly sweet. I loved this ending. :) I'd probably comment more if it were some other time but it's four in the morning, and I'm exhausted. But me staying up to four is a testament to the fantastic-ness that is your story. ^_^
8/11/2008 c20 reader
This is a most wonderful story, and I can't believe I haven't reviewed yet, but that's probably because I was way to absorbed in the story to do so earlier. I love Kennedy's character and how things are based around her and her past, which we don't discover until later. It's a lovely composition. Now that I think about it, I don't feel like we have much development on Harrison (or any of the other guys, but I don't care about them so much)...it's just that I feel like those guys are only there to support her. Which is incredible sweet and romantic and wonderful to read, but now that I think about it, it would be nice to see how she changed THEM, too. That's not very evident because the reader doesn't really have much insight into their backgrounds other that they are rich and neglected children who have formed a strong brotherhood together.
In any case, I adore your story. Thanks so much for posting it!
This is a most wonderful story, and I can't believe I haven't reviewed yet, but that's probably because I was way to absorbed in the story to do so earlier. I love Kennedy's character and how things are based around her and her past, which we don't discover until later. It's a lovely composition. Now that I think about it, I don't feel like we have much development on Harrison (or any of the other guys, but I don't care about them so much)...it's just that I feel like those guys are only there to support her. Which is incredible sweet and romantic and wonderful to read, but now that I think about it, it would be nice to see how she changed THEM, too. That's not very evident because the reader doesn't really have much insight into their backgrounds other that they are rich and neglected children who have formed a strong brotherhood together.
In any case, I adore your story. Thanks so much for posting it!
7/25/2008 c25 belle1220
I just read this whole story tonight and all I have to say is that I will definitely be waking up with puffy eyes tomorrow. The writing was so wonderful and the way you handled everything from the romance between Harrison and Kennedy to Kennedy's past and Peters death was brilliant.
I am completely in love with this story. Wonderful, wonderful job.
I just read this whole story tonight and all I have to say is that I will definitely be waking up with puffy eyes tomorrow. The writing was so wonderful and the way you handled everything from the romance between Harrison and Kennedy to Kennedy's past and Peters death was brilliant.
I am completely in love with this story. Wonderful, wonderful job.
6/26/2008 c1 
5Fayre Meira
...i am still struck speechless and trying to think of how to best put my thoughts into words. you made me cry. i hate you. lol. I've always hated to cry after reading sappy stories, but this one is just so incredibly beautiful. i wish i had written this. i hope i'll be able to write something like this. you're an amazing writer.
thank you for posting this here and allowing me a glimpse of your oceanic talents. i hope to read more of your writing. take care,
amaryllis
5Fayre Meira...i am still struck speechless and trying to think of how to best put my thoughts into words. you made me cry. i hate you. lol. I've always hated to cry after reading sappy stories, but this one is just so incredibly beautiful. i wish i had written this. i hope i'll be able to write something like this. you're an amazing writer.
thank you for posting this here and allowing me a glimpse of your oceanic talents. i hope to read more of your writing. take care,
amaryllis
6/18/2008 c25 Muffins
I absolutly loved it it was amazing and you should totaly write a sequal about their kids. that would be greatly amazing.
Good job on finishing this I know how hard it is to finish stories. Best of luck with your new one and I hope that it turns out as good as this one.
I absolutly loved it it was amazing and you should totaly write a sequal about their kids. that would be greatly amazing.
Good job on finishing this I know how hard it is to finish stories. Best of luck with your new one and I hope that it turns out as good as this one.
6/9/2008 c25 Alicia
Hey
I greatly enjoyed reading your story, especially with the character development and how Kennedy always retains that sarcasm in her regardless whether or not she's all dark and twisty or just ordinary. :D Keeps her constant!
I also did like how the focus of the story wasn't placed entirely on the romance, but alot on the characters, on the history, and on the actual plot. I think you could have ended by writing out what kennedy did say to nathan though, you know, so it goes full circle. But regardless, even without it ended wonderfully. (:
Oh i forgot to mention that i also liked how Spencer and Emma weren't completely happy and still together because its more realistic and gives that difference from an archetypal happy romance fiction.
I LIKED IT VERY MUCH!
Hey
I greatly enjoyed reading your story, especially with the character development and how Kennedy always retains that sarcasm in her regardless whether or not she's all dark and twisty or just ordinary. :D Keeps her constant!
I also did like how the focus of the story wasn't placed entirely on the romance, but alot on the characters, on the history, and on the actual plot. I think you could have ended by writing out what kennedy did say to nathan though, you know, so it goes full circle. But regardless, even without it ended wonderfully. (:
Oh i forgot to mention that i also liked how Spencer and Emma weren't completely happy and still together because its more realistic and gives that difference from an archetypal happy romance fiction.
I LIKED IT VERY MUCH!
6/6/2008 c25 9Stahlut
That was really good, I got pretty teary eyed. I'm glad you finally wrote the epilogue, it was a really good conclusion to a great story, so well done.
9StahlutThat was really good, I got pretty teary eyed. I'm glad you finally wrote the epilogue, it was a really good conclusion to a great story, so well done.
5/30/2008 c25 Monica
loved it! i couldn't stop reading it. =] great job.
loved it! i couldn't stop reading it. =] great job.
5/30/2008 c25 82Doxology
Well, I liked the epilogue. The note from Nate was very sweet. And I do like how you kept it realistic, though it was sad. Anyways, great job.
Cheers,
timshel
82DoxologyWell, I liked the epilogue. The note from Nate was very sweet. And I do like how you kept it realistic, though it was sad. Anyways, great job.
Cheers,
timshel
5/29/2008 c25 2Only4Miken
I loved this story. I just had to keep reading it and now im upset the its done with.
2Only4MikenI loved this story. I just had to keep reading it and now im upset the its done with.
5/27/2008 c25 OoohLookACat
oh i don't care how disappointing you think it is
a tear or two actually fell
so be proud
=]
ohh the memories
i love this story
so so much
you did a great job
i shall be looking out for more from you
izzie
oh i don't care how disappointing you think it is
a tear or two actually fell
so be proud
=]
ohh the memories
i love this story
so so much
you did a great job
i shall be looking out for more from you
izzie
2/21/2008 c24 11Living.My.Life.My.Way
sry its been so long since ive reviewed. i promise i dont hate your story now..ive just been grounded for 6 months. and i loved the ending. tear tear...its over...my addicting story is over...wahh! i am up at 3 on a school nite reading it...and its over...WAH!1
11Living.My.Life.My.Waysry its been so long since ive reviewed. i promise i dont hate your story now..ive just been grounded for 6 months. and i loved the ending. tear tear...its over...my addicting story is over...wahh! i am up at 3 on a school nite reading it...and its over...WAH!1
1/20/2008 c8 1Phantasia.89
I've enjoyed this story so far, but I've just found it really hard to like Kennedy or Chase. I know you made it obvious that Kennedy has a history, but she seems really annoying to me sometimes... like when Spencer & the others were trying to befriend her - to me she just seemed to act difficult & quite unfairly. I don't know if my opinion will change as I read on, but atm this is really bugging me. Same with Chase, he seems to act badly without a justifiable reason. This may just be because we don't know enough about what motivates them atm.
I don't mean this as an insult, so I hope I don't offend you. I just thought I'd give you my honest opinion. Other than this aspect of the character development, you write very well : )
1Phantasia.89I've enjoyed this story so far, but I've just found it really hard to like Kennedy or Chase. I know you made it obvious that Kennedy has a history, but she seems really annoying to me sometimes... like when Spencer & the others were trying to befriend her - to me she just seemed to act difficult & quite unfairly. I don't know if my opinion will change as I read on, but atm this is really bugging me. Same with Chase, he seems to act badly without a justifiable reason. This may just be because we don't know enough about what motivates them atm.
I don't mean this as an insult, so I hope I don't offend you. I just thought I'd give you my honest opinion. Other than this aspect of the character development, you write very well : )