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for Wendy in Wonderland

6/26/2007 c1 140Pesadilla Mortal
The format for this poem was perfect. The way it was spaced honestly gave me the visual effect of falling and of cascading down. This is wonderfully written and cast me into a dreamworld of my own as I read it. Very though provoking and very well-written. :]

4/5/2007 c1 she smolders
Wow, in some ways this poem is so simple with the short lines but then it surprised me because of how powerful the emotions were in it. Your Wendy is so real and I wish I could cure her pain. Take care.
4/3/2007 c1 Counting Petals
I like how it seemed like just a bunch of rambling thoughts, because growing up can be confusing, and you conveyed that very well. I can definitely relate to this.
4/1/2007 c1 54tasted like heartache
it made me smile.

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