for Silver Rains4/3/2007 c1 
332smile for the sunshine
That was really pretty. I like the different view point. I love the way that you used detail. Silver rains is such a creative name. Good job; it was a great poem.
332smile for the sunshineThat was really pretty. I like the different view point. I love the way that you used detail. Silver rains is such a creative name. Good job; it was a great poem.
4/2/2007 c1 11xDancingintheRainx
Wow. This is a truly beautiful piece. You descriptions are so graceful and lovely and the imagery was wonderful. I really like this piece and I think you did an excellent job! Thanks for the review!
11xDancingintheRainxWow. This is a truly beautiful piece. You descriptions are so graceful and lovely and the imagery was wonderful. I really like this piece and I think you did an excellent job! Thanks for the review!
3/30/2007 c1 17DOORphrame
I think stanza breaks would help the flow better, so it’s easier to read. I loved the imagery though, and how it suddenly switched from a description of the rain to a utopian ideal. It’s a really odd comparison, yet it works really well.
17DOORphrameI think stanza breaks would help the flow better, so it’s easier to read. I loved the imagery though, and how it suddenly switched from a description of the rain to a utopian ideal. It’s a really odd comparison, yet it works really well.