12/4/2009 c1 34Lyra Pocaterra
I like it, people don´t often see past your looks, and its something that really annoys me. I like the shortness of some of the sentences, it makes them have more impact on the reader.

Keep writing!

3/30/2007 c1 polka dots and addictions
wow.

this kind of reminds me of the ending of the piece im working on atm.

& i love it- the first bit is very gaspworhty, & then the next bit fits on so well, & then the ending is gorgeous.

beautifully written.

thanks for the reviews :]

~Bex xx